Showing posts with label encouragement for writers. Show all posts
Showing posts with label encouragement for writers. Show all posts

Saturday, February 19, 2022

How to Get a $5 Gift Card to the Book and Bean Cafe in Joliet

If you're a reader or writer in the Will County area (or know a reader or writer), here's an event for you.

The Joliet Public Library is hosting WriteOn Joliet co-leaders Tom Hernandez and me from 6 to 8 p.m. Feb. 24 at the 3395 Black Road inJoliet.

The library is one of WriteOn Joliet's community partners. The other is The Book Market in Crest Hill.

During this two-hour program, Tom and I will discuss the writing process, as well as WriteOn Joliet and the opportunities this adult critique group provides for local writers. 

Tom and I will share a few excerpts from some of our writings.

And Tom and I will sell and sign books - the individual books we have written and anthologies written and published by WriteOn Joliet members.

Tom will also provide details about the last stop on his "Tip Jar Tour."

And the BryonySeries table (my table) is offering a special gift with select purchases of BryonySeries books: a $5 gift card to the Book and Bean Cafe in Joliet while supplies last.

If you make your book purchase before the program begins, you may use your card immediately since cafe will be open until 8 p.m. that night.

Gift cards are not limited one per customer. But for each additional card, you must still purchase one of these four combinations:

1) One "regular" young adult or adult BryonySeries book (choices include any book in the "drop of blood" trilogy, Lycanthropic Summer, The Phoenix, Ruthless by Ed Calkins Steward of Tara or any of the Before the Blood books) or Nine Months of Kindness.

2) Any two books in The Adventures of Cornell Dyer series.

 3) Any three books in the Bertrand the Mouse series.

 4) All three of our BryonySeries cookbooks.

 To check out our books, visit bryonyseries.com/general-store.

And to check out the Book and Bean Cafe's menu, visit bookandbeanjoliet.com

Don't live in the Joliet area? 

Message me at bryonyseries@gmail.com.

I will discount any book by $5 on Feb. 24 only.

Then you have $5 to purchase the treat of your choice.

Happy browsing! 

Happy reading!



Tuesday, February 2, 2021

Artists: It's Normal Not to Sell A Lot (and a plug for a great cafe)

I found this gem of a post a few weeks ago. I'm including the link so you can read it for yourself.

Despite the flood of posts online about people who used this or that method and made millions, the truth is that most people don't, which is why people flock to them. If it was commonplace to make millions (or any other amount of money that is significant), the topic would be commonplace and no one would care.

OK. So we know that.

Yet what was lovely about this post, for me, was its comparison to an indie coffee shop. And that's why I reserved this post. I waited until the Book and Bean Cafe inside the Joliet Public Library reopened - which it did yesterday.

Because that cafe instantly came to mind when I read the post.

A few key points for you to consider today, whether you are a seller or a consumer.

1) Selling a lot of anything doesn't equal customer satisfaction.

2) Some people will be super stoked to take your artwork or book home with them. 

3) The Book and Bean Cafe serves up friendly community spirit as it tenaciously survives during these tough times and showcases local art. The photo below is from 2018, when four of my BryonySeries artists set up for a two-month long exhibit in that cafe. That is connection is exactly the cafe's owner strives to create in her space.

Obviously some of you reading this today don't live in Joliet.

But most of you will know a place like the cafe.

And you will understand.

Here's the post: Read the first two blocks.

Be encouraged. Be supportive.

https://www.kboards.com/threads/its-normal-not-to-sell-a-lot.177159/



Photo by Timothy Baran



Saturday, December 5, 2020

For Writers - Or Anyone Struggling to Believe in Their Abilities

I had reserved Thanksgiving weekend to do a hard edit on Ed Calkins' Ruthless. The novel is part of the BryonySeries world and harkens back mostly to the original "drop of blood" trilogy.

As outrageously entertaining Ed's novel is (a mixture of the real Ed's back story, the back story of his fictional Ed, the fictional Ed I further fictionalized for the BryonySeries, and the further fictionalization of all that in Ruthless), are some real gems.

I'm sharing just four short paragraphs of it. I had hoped to share it with WriteOn Joliet Thursday, but we ran out of time, which s just as well because now I can share it with more people. Our topic was "And the winner is..." and as I'm listening to the pieces WriteOn Joliet members shared, I suddenly remembered this excerpt I'm sharing today.

To put this in context, the main protagonists in Ruthless are Ed and a woman named Trudy - a bipolar alcoholic police officer and former best friend, and "once or twice" lover of Ed Calkins who is convinced she shot Ed. She's brilliantly crafted, and I think readers will like her.

But at other times, the real/somewhat real/completely fictional vampire Ed breaks the fourth wall and talks in first person. This is what's happening in the excerpt I'm sharing. It sounds like the end of the novel, but it isn't. It's simply the last time Ed speaks in first person.

BTW, Ed really is terribly dyslexic and only wrote this novel with a great deal of prodding. It wasn't my idea either; one of my super fans really wanted me to write it, and I felt only Ed could and should.

And he did.

May you be encouraged today.

             

My dear spy…er literary genius, we must now talk of endings. This well have to be my last chapter writing to you directly in first person. I’ve done everything the future requires of me except meeting my best friend in a field of battle. It’s not the combat I fear any more than the result. It’s you, I fear. I fear you will think badly of me for something terrible that I did while I was still alive with my own damaged soul.

              The day I won the lottery…I behaved badly. Maybe you should skip the next few chapters and just read the ending. If you did that, you’d think better of me.

              Whether or not you do, I must thank you. I know I was a jerk when you first started reading, but I didn’t really believe that I could write anything worth reading. But you kept on reading, and I started believing. It’s believing in you that helped me believe in me. Isn’t it strange that a novel that asks both writer and reader to believe in wood sprites, leprechauns, and brownies and all sorts of other myths sound find the hardest belief of all is ourselves? I find myself at the end of a story I thought I would never tell. I find myself finishing a story that is actually worth reading…expect of the next part. Thank you for believing in me when I could not believe in you. Now, with your skills as a reader, a world of brownies, rainbows, clovers, lovers, and leprechauns are just one good dream away and maybe if you so grant it…one good laugh.

              Fare thee well, reader. May you live as long as you want and never want as long as you live.




Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Halfway Point (Yes, a Retreat Update and Encouraging Words for All)

Today is Wednesday, and it's usually the day I become grouchy and fed-up with the entire process.

I actually kind of hit that Monday through yesterday, in pieces. I think I'm over it.

What helped?

Last night I was working on a chapter I'd started one night because it was a good chapter for writing at night, you know, mood and all.

But to get back into it, I had to re-read parts of it. And some of it was actually pretty good. That was extremely encouraging.

So if you need encouragement today, here's my suggestion. Step back from the trees a moment and look at the forest. Review what's gone right and what you've done well.

It sounds simple, right? So simple, we often don't do it.

Lose your temper today? Remind yourself where you kept it.

Missed an opportunity to be kind? Remind yourself when you didn't.

Bathroom won't pass CDC inspections? Yes, but all the laundry is done. (OK, some of the laundry. Or at least you've bought laundry detergent).

Burned the chicken? But the mashed potatoes are wonderfully fluffy.

Your writing sucks? So does mine. But apparently not all of it.

You fell off the diet? But you've also spent weeks increasing your portions of fresh vegetables.

Build on the comments at the right. Root out the other ones, the weeds in your goals.

Keep planting your dreams and celebrating your harvest.


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. I can't tell if I'm slightly behind or slightly ahead. I'm looking at two partial chapters today and one complete one. So right on track?

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

So far:

Nearly two chapter drafts of The Phoenix each day, and that's it.

Slightly behind, but yesterday was a day of intermittent interruptions and one health emergency for my oldest son.

But at this rate, I'll have all of the chapters of The Phoenix drafted by Saturday morning.

And I'll still have the weekend to finish the plan.

That is the plan from a Wednesday morning point of view.



Illustration by Christopher Gleason for "Staked!"

Monday, March 9, 2020

How to Coax a Stubborn Muse

Although I wouldn't go so far as accusing my muse (Warren Peace) of "ghosting" me, it's certainly been uninspired and unreliable lately.

But it did reappear in small and significant ways this weekend, enough that I'm happy with the progress I'm making on one of my new novels (no time to open the second one).

How did I coax the muse out of hiding? It's mostly a matter of training and persistence, like teaching your kid to take out the trash.

Honestly, I have no idea why the muse decided to get busy this weekend, but I'm glad it did.

However, here's a few suggestions that often work for me.


1) Show up.

While that may seem like a no-brainer, that does help.

Sitting at the computer (or preferred writing area) and actually opening up the manuscript are good first steps.

2) Bring the muse its favorite drink.

Warren Peace likes dark roast coffee. Hot.

Find out what your muse likes and keep a nice supply handy - along with a microwave for warmups.

3) Put yourself in your muse's shoes.

Think about all the times the muse DID show up, and you DIDN'T.

My muse tends to nap on weekends and then show up at the most inconvenient times (such as when I'm on deadline at work or trying to sleep at night).

For all the "not now, dear; I'm busy" excuses I've given my muse when it's been ready to write, I should be more understanding when it tells me the same thing.

Could your muse too busy with distractions? Sulking at being stood up too many times?

Knowing the reason goes a long way to addressing it.

4) Take time to warm up.

As in any exercise, a few stretches helps the workout. Why should a mental one be any different?

Don't expect your muse to sprint at full speed.

Try this: Reread work from the past weeks and soon your muse will be racing.

5) Keep tidbits of inspiration handy.

People don't work well on an empty stomach. Well, a muse doesn't work well on an empty mind.

Have little inspirational snacks ready (a favorite quote, a deadline, a timer) to ensure the muse is able to work at a somewhat steady face.

But don't overfeed it when it's supposed to work.

Overfeeding the muse can quickly turn into a twelve-course meal of surfing social media and clicking from link to unrelated link, which may put your muse into snooze mode.

6) Give the muse room to wander.

You really want to finish chapter five but the muse has great dialogue for chapter twelve? Go with it!

You like to write in sequence but the muse has ideas for scenes in three different chapters you haven't even tackled yet? Explore that!

Or simply write as the muse dictates, in a free flowing way without expectations as to where the it (sentence, paragraph, chapter, etc.) will wind up. The best journeys sometimes come with no expectations.

7) Praise your muse.

We spend so much time "killing our darlings" that we forget to give our muse a pat on the wisp and let it know when it's done a good job, and we are really, really pleased.

"What a clever sentence" and "Great plot twist!" gives your muse the encouragement it needs to keep producing for you.

8) Don't be a relentless taskmaster.

Look for signs your muse is organically slowing down and know when to give it a rest. A rested muse is happier to work for you.

On the other hand...

9) Don't let your muse deceive you.

Muses are fickle by nature and, like many of us on the weekends, would rather chill and be lazy.

Get to know your muse well enough so you can differentiate between a muse that is exhausted and one that feigns fatigue so it can watch mindless hours of Netflix.

10) Reward your muse and give generously to it.

Muses love good music and good books. Keep a large supply on hand.

For AFTER the writing work is done.








Illustration by Christopher Gleason for "Staked!" Follow him at artworkbytopher.com.

Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Kansas, Priest Shortages, and Russian Immigrants

Once a month for quite a few years now, I lead a fiction workshop. The cost is a $10 donation to Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties.

What makes this group different from the critique group I co-lead (WriteOn Joliet) is the opportunity to spend an intense several hours focusing on certain aspects of plot, world or character building, dialogue, etc.

For instance, we've spent several months working on character perspective or structured outlining. It mostly depends on the needs of the participants.

This past Friday was a jumble of topics all relating to a certain character in one man's novel.

Lats month, I realized this particular author, who has written and self-published many books, has never written a male protagonist, so I challenged him to consider it for a future book.

He arrived last week with an outline in hand for a novel that tells the back story of the brother of one of his protagonists. The brother is a Catholic priest, the adopted son of Russian immigrants who settled in Kansas, who has retired at age 65 and moved into his sister's house.

My first question was, "Why Kansas?"

The author had no concrete answer.

So while I was expressing my disbelief over Russian immigrants, who were most likely Eastern Orthodox, making their home and starting up a business in Kansas (all the while thinking that I should probably look this up), this author's wife, who also attends, did, in fact, pick up her phone and then laugh out loud.

She had found plenty of posts about the migration of Russian-Germans to Kansas. Most of these immigrants were not Easter Orthodox, but Christians of other faiths, largely (but not limited to) the Mennonite population.

Here is the first line (and a link, for the curious) from a post from the Kansas Historical Society.

ONE HUNDRED years ago several thousand German-speaking people from Russia settled on lands in Kansas and left a considerable impact upon the history of the state. 

https://www.kshs.org/p/the-migration-of-the-russian-germans-to-kansas/13242

Then we also researched and discussed priest shortages, retirement age for priests (and the process for it), and the unlikely possibility that this pastor and parish priest simply "decided" to retire at age 65 and move into the house of his choice.

We've spent entire meetings (or good chunks of them) working on rural Scotland in the eighteenth century, how far boiling spaghetti sauce travels if left unattended in a pot, and the development of a rich female teen when the protagonist meets her for the first time by bumping into her.

It probably sounds like a lot of effort, and it is.

But the goal is to create a world and characters so seamless the reader forgets he's reading.

For the writer, this process is fun, informative, and it allows us to steep ourselves in this really lovely part of our imaginations.

And, at least once month, we get to steep ourselves in the building block imaginations of other writers.




Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony."

Thursday, May 30, 2019

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: WriteOn Joliet's First Meeting

This was part of a post from February 6, 2012.


Several weeks ago, a local writer, Kristina Gardner Skaggs (see her short story, Dead Seriouswww.bryonyseries.com/Harold_Masters.html and her interview at http://bryonyseries.blogspot.com/2011/09/meet-kristina-skaggs-author-of-dead.html) approached me about assisting her with a new writer’s group. 


A few conversational emails later, we finalized time, date, and location: 6:30 to 8:00 p.m., the first and third Thursdays of every month, at the Three Rivers Arts Council (TRAC), 413 Mondamin Road, Minooka. 

To our delight, five local writers turned out for that first meeting last week We shared our interests, heard some readings, set some goals, directed each other to helpful sites, and brainstormed our official title. 



Since that time, we've moved to the Joliet Public Library at 3395 Black Road in Joliet, published three anthologies (with another out later this year), expanded membership, held a few workshops, and branched into marketing.

This past month, we hosted our first display at the Joliet Public Library's downtown branch at 150 N. Ottawa St. in Joliet. The display comes down after our meet and greet from 6 to 8:30 p.m. tonight, so if you haven't seen it, this is the last opportunity.

Some of our members (including me) will be present with books we've written, along with our three WriteOn Joliet anthologies (along with our latest, "Cheetah Stories"), so please stop out and say, "Hi."

In short, we're here to support local writers, AND we're helping local writers produce the very best reading material possible for readers, voracious and otherwise.

For more information, visit writeonjoliet.com. 





Monday, July 30, 2018

Yes, You Probably Do Have a Book In You

Like many writers, I belong to several writers groups on social media.

This past weekend, someone posted this article written by Kate McKean of the Howard Morhaim Literary Agency: No, you probably don’t have a book in you: A literary agent on why your good story isn’t likely to be a bestseller.

McKean elaborated on the following points: 

1) Every story is not a book.

2) Writing is hard. 

3) Publishing is a retail industry, not a meritocracy.

4) Just because you are fluent doesn’t mean you can write.

Comments on the group ranged from respectful to upset, with some not-so-good opinions about traditional publishing to some lauding of self-publishing or seeing self-publishing as a last resort if an author can't land a traditional publisher.

Part of the confusion, I feel, lies in the difference between writing as art and writing as business, or the difference between creative and commercial art.

Writers: although overlap may occur, they are not the same.

Here's what I posted:

I'm the entire features section of a daily, a self-published author of several series, and the co-leader and co-founder of a writer's group. I stress the above points to those hoping to "get picked up" by a literary agent. 

Being published traditionally does not equal validation of good writing. All it means is that the author has written a book a publisher thinks it can sell. The writing can be good, bad, or indifferent. But it can be edited into a salable product that can be targeted to a specific market. I do this all the time with news releases and story pitches in my section. 

I've seen bad writers sign traditional contracts and some outstanding writers struggling to find readers for their outstanding novels. I tell writers all the time: "If you have an idea for a story burning inside you and will dedicate the long hours required to shape that story into a mesmerizing, believable read, you're a writer. Enjoy the process! You may only find five readers turning somersaults over your work, but that's OK. Write your story for them." 

With so many self-publishing options available now, it's an exciting time to be a writer. If you want to be a commercial fiction writer, study the market and write to it. But here's the thing. By the time a commercial work is ready for publication, the market may have changed. And no one, including literary agents and the top five, can predict what book will sell a surprising amount of copies. 

So write the book inside you, the book only you can write. And make it the best book it can be. A truly great book never goes unread.

And also this:

An agent only makes money with the sale of a manuscript. If I was a literary agent, I would not accept a project I could not sell. As far as publishing houses and blockbusters go, the blockbusters give new authors a foot in the door. Many, perhaps most, books do not earn out their advances. Many houses survive on blockbusters, making it possible to accept other books they know won't sell as well. Publishing is a business.

And finally this:

Once upon a time (get it, LOL), a midlist author could enjoy a quiet comfortable career. Publishers had larger staffs and worked with authors they felt had promise. But things change. Where I work, the features section had two editors, one staff writer, and a bottomless freelance budget. That was 1998 when I started writing for this newspaper. 

Today, I am the entire section and have no freelance budget. When I freelance and wrote stories on local authors "published" by vanity presses, I swore never to become one of the them. But as I learned more about what constitutes true self-publishing, I found another adventure. 

Every era in publishing brings its own opportunities and challenges. Let's seize the first and navigate the second. Who knows? Instead of bemoaning the changing of the game, we can become game - changers, and all these comments will sound quaint in ten years.

Writing a book takes knowledge, time, discipline, and persistence, and writers often (maybe usually) receive very low return for that effort. Writers, no matter how they publish their works, struggle to find readers for their writing. 

True, a writer may sell more books through a traditional house, and true, some self-published authors do very well.

But most books, published or not, sell only 250 to 2,000 copies in their lifetimes (depending which report you read), very discouraging to fierce dreams of becoming the exception. 

I've written and self-published several books, and I doubt any of them will hit even 250 in sales. I remarked at a recent WriteOn Joliet meeting that Before the Blood, this five-volume prequel to the BryonySeries trilogy that's consumed nearly ten years of my life, will likely only sell five copies in its lifetime.

And yet, I'm so very glad I wrote it.

If you haven't guessed, I agree with each of McKean's points.

However this does not mean writers should not write that book. Good God, YES, they should write it.

Write it to develop your talents.

Write it to entertain your imagination.

Write it for your own set of five people who will savor (or devour) it and clamor for more.

If every book was a bestseller, bestsellers would not exist.

If every book received a traditional publishing contract, publishers could not afford to publish books.

But that doesn't mean the process isn't valuable or that a writer's words don't have the power to change someone's life, even if it's the writer's.

So if you have a story or a topic burning inside you: write!

Here's the link to the complete article if you'd like to read it.




Thursday, March 22, 2018

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: It's the Challenges that Form

Tuesday, March 27, 2012


It's the Challenges that Form

Most of us like  to hear praise and encouragement; there's no doubt about it; and most of us enjoy standing on the pinnacle and gazing down the mountain at the conquered rocky slope, and I am no exception.

However, it's the dark, solitary, teeth-gnashing, gut-wrenching, clawing-through-challenges--despite, doubt, pain, loneliness, weariness, failure, etc.--that press, shape, and mold us into the people we are continually becoming and striving to be.

So when I encounter those circumstances in my life--and I have experienced one or two--and I'm uncertain whether I can or should keep plowing resistant furrows, and assuming the task is in the will of God for me, I grab a symbolic looksie into the mirror and ask myself one question: How badly do I want this?

It's no secret I'm a technological and software dummy. During the early editing and formatting stages with Bryony, shifting text, and the perpetual resetting page breaks, was hugely frustrating for me (an understatement).

One night, after I had already missed bedtime by hours and would greet the day by delivering mountains of papers wayyyyy too soon, and my flaccid attempts to halt the shifting again failed, I absolutely cracked.

Clutching handfuls of manuscript, I flew down the ladder, screaming, "It's wronnnnnggggggggg," to anyone in earshot. Timothy and Rebekah were hanging out in the kitchen and talking, but paused to gaze at me as if I had gone insane.

After a few minutes of ranting, raving, foot-stomping, thumping Timothy's back, and a spewing of colorful language, I marched back up the ladder and began resetting page breaks (Keep in mind this was a six hundred page manuscript). Rebekah was right behind me with a stern, "Go to bed!"

And my equally terse reply was, "Not until I make a dent." And I stoically reset another break.

Months later, I shared that scene with my book designer, Serena Diosa, and she, bless her, laughed heartily and offered to show me a simple technique to prevent shifting text. What an insightful moment. If only I'd had that information at the beginning, I could have avoided hours of mistakes. Yet, the incident was a valuable one for me because I was truly considering quitting altogether.

What stopped me? I really, really wanted to take this project all the way to the conclusion. I didn't want to just see the promised land. I wanted to stand on it, walk through it, claim it, SEIZE IT!

So, I started over.

Today, that scene is often replayed in my household. Whenever someone encounters a problem that appears too big to handle, a hurdle so enormous the goal no longer seems worth it, I only have to say, "Page breaks," and then ask the question, "How badly do you want this?"

Now someone in the throes of distress might prefer a bit of warm and fuzzy coddling and a soft, "There, there," and there are appropriate times for meting it out, for applying the soothing salve of, "You can do this," and "I believe in you," etc. But when you've lost your footing on a perilous ledge, a sweet utterance is not the solution.

Sometimes, what a person wants and needs are completely different. Too often, we leave behind an undesirable situation, only to repeat it, with different circumstances and people, perhaps, but our pattern of approach and behavior, even with slight modifications, is too predictably similar to produce the end we desire.

When an individual is battered and banged with defeat and discouragement and on the verge of abandoning the prize, tauntingly in sight and still so elusive, the needed remedy is really to quickly bandage up those wounds, deliver an unkind nudge into the nether regions, and harshly remind the person the consequences of forsaking the quest.

May you always have both kinds of people in your life, those that comfort, buck up, and applaud you, but, most importantly, those who command you out of the cozy places to meet, head-on and with open eyes, the awaiting destiny.

Lazarus might have felt blissfully peaceful inside the tomb, but Jesus' firm, "Lazarus, come out!" opened up an unbelievably new existence for the man.

You will stumble through dimly lit, uncharted territory. You will kiss the dirt. You'll greet uncertainty. You'll take wrong turns. You'll grow increasingly aggravated and pissed off at the circumstances and the people shoving you forward, at the ones offering dangling carrots.

And yet, it's really the only way to reach the joys of the peak.

So, what's on your "bucket list?

How badly do you want it?






Tuesday, July 11, 2017

Quick Fix For Writer Discouragement

Is the next chapter jelling well?

Have you run out of ideas?

Does the prose sound stilted and boring?

Or is it simply TAKING TOO LONG?

Although all of the above is part of the process, sometimes a tired brain needs a pick-me-up and an encouraging pat.

So while you're brewing another cup of dark roast, open up a previous chapter (or essay, poem, etc.) and not a recent chapter either. Pick one that felt laborious to write at the time, one you meticulously self-edited.

Read how nicely the words flow. Feel the joy in reading it. Remember the long journey to get there.

See? You can do it. You can really, really do it. 

You just need time.

And patience.

And more hard work.

The Holy Trinity of good writing. Amen?