Showing posts with label 19th century. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 19th century. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 11, 2025

Building the BryonySeries World

For those who are new to this blog, I posted my first blog post on August 1, 2010, and have blogged nearly daily ever since.

And while I've (overall) shared posts on the topics I listed on that first blog, I recently realized I've moved away from sharing much about the actual substance, crafting, and content of my books.

I'm hoping to reverse that on Tuesdays going forward (I hope).

So while I'm working on some of those said blogs, here are twenty-one posts from the first five months of the BryonySeries blog, back when we started it in 2010, more than a year before we published the first book.

Most of the posts are very brief - a couple of paragraphs at best. But they provide a nice glimpse into the building blocks of the BryonySeries world.

Happy reading!


That Lightning Bolt Moment

The Research Into Bryony

What is "Bryony?"

Woods, Water & Michigan, Part 1

Why a Bryony Cookbook

Some Traditional Vampire Lore

Woods, Water & Michigan, Part 2

Leeches 101

Woods, Water & Michigan, Part 3

A Peek Inside the Bryony Cookbook

Why Vampires

De-Romanticizing Vampires

Vampire Bat Facts

Teen Vampire Readings

Strange Foods

Someone Finally Asked It

How the Real Ed Calkins Became a Fictional Vampire

The Language of Fans

Snowbell

Jack the Cleaning Man

Storytelling and Storehouses of Memories



Thursday, September 22, 2022

32 Quotes from "The Phoenix"

When we were getting ready to release Bryony back in 2011, my daughter Sarah (who did a lot of the marketing for me) suggested I pull thirty teaser quotes from the book that she could post on Facebook, one each day.

We did the same for the second book, Visagewhich is also part of the BryonySeries.

But for some reason, I never did the same for another book.

So now I am catching up.

Here is the synopsis and chapter headings for The Phoenix, (the first book in the BryonySeries Limbo trilogy), followed by thirty-two quotes, one from each chapter.

Enjoy!

Late 1895 in Munsonville, Michigan is all about survival and rebuilding: for the fishing village still reeling from deadly tragedies, for twelve-year-old Marie Clare who is grounded at Munsonville Inn with her dying father, and for two newly turned vampires foraging their meals from a dwindling supply of villagers.

But to rise strong and unscathed, some will be sacrificed along the way. Who gets to live and thrive? And who decides?

Prologue

George gasped, choked, and convulsed; blood shot from his mouth, spattering the fish loaf, boiled cabbage, apple pudding, and the cheese he had scorned and staining the white tablecloth with tributaries of scarlet.

Chapter 1: A Sick Man and His Dream

“Simons Mansion!” Dr. Parks exclaimed. “I rescue you  from the brink of hell, and you ask about Simons Mansion?”

Chapter 2: Night Crawler

A deathly quiet surrounded him, a silence not broken by the pounding of his heart or the roaring of his breath in his ears as he used to know deafening silences. It was just Henry and the dog, and neither was alive anymore.

Chapter 3: Lake of Fire

They choked on smokes; they dodged stampedes and gunfire. They waded through whispering corn; they poured the wine, slept in brothels, and bought their spring wardrobe, their summer wardrobe, their fall wardrobe.

Chapter 4: Stripe for Stripe

Faraway from inside the colonial, a clock struck two with solemn gongs.

The hour of the demon.

Or so he always wrote.

Chapter 5: River of Life

“What would Dad think if we let his good friend die?” Leo said quietly as he rolled up his sleeve to the shoulder. “Would he rejoice in heaven? Smile down at our good sense?”

Chapter 6: Red Meat

He cared about blood. 

Not family blood, but the blood of families laid out in their beds like quail on a serving platter. He flinched and shuddered at the thought of that delicate bird roasted in its juice with black pepper and allspice. The only quail that quickened his palate was raw, bloody, and ebbing from life.

Chapter 7: Weeping Cometh by Day

Healthy residents retire at night; a random few expire before dawn. Could a mutated tuberculosis be the cause? A new plague from distant lands that migrated to these soils?

It seems unlikely the cause is demons, not with a rumored vivisectionist practicing in their midst, who could easily stake and dismember any prowling vampires.

For the safety of all, a quarantine remains in place, which all are heeding.

Except the vampires.

Chapter 8: From Cellar to Ceiling

Kellen Wechsler, John’s manager, was lounging in a wingback far away from the fire, sulking and smoking a cigar. He wore only black, the same shade as his hair, eyes, goatee, nails, everything except his waxy skin, which was pale as death. Unlike John, Kellen sported a certain “freshness,” like when a butcher presses blood into spoiled meat for reselling

Chapter 9: A Place of Perdition

"You dream by night; you know the nature of dreams. When dawn arrives, you eagerly allow dreams to fragment and disperse in favor of daylight and sunshine. Well, Little Marie, I am like a man wakened from a long sleep. It is time that I, too, walk in the light. Have you no comment?”

Chapter 10: The Dead Should Be His Own

So Kellen clawed his way out of his crypt with his phony vampire kit in his hand and reemerged behind Simons Mansion, ready to do his evil deed, which Kellen assured himself was really a good deed, like culling deer.

Chapter 11: A Little Wine for Your Stomach, Part One

But Dr. Parks only looked inside the goblet, as if hypnotized by its ripples, and she wondered what he saw: the wine’s deep color, almost black with a plum blush near the top, or something beyond the wine. 

For if one peered closely, one might perceive nuances of its bouquet: elegant, smooth, and mature, a wine to be savored in all its complexities. A more reflective person might detect the high regard the family had for its head – and the head’s physician – since only the best was served up to them. One who pondered spiritual truths might understand the medicinal depths this wine represented, both to the drinker and the one who poured.

But most people didn’t look that far. 

Chapter 12: A Little Wine for Your Stomach, Part Two

“Look, you can cultivate elegance and civility like a decent human being.”

“I’m neither decent nor human.”

Chapter 13: Brain Fever

But although Marie dutifully bent her head over her grammar, sparks of panic disrupted the pathway between her mind and the written characters, and she spent most of the time stomping them out.

Chapter 14: None Greater Can Be Conceived

When he finally reached the top, he turned left for the opportunity to turn right was gone; he must only turn left; he was incapable of turning any other way.

Chapter 15:  When Even Words Won’t Stir Him

Isabella had not washed or changed her clothes for many days, and she smelled as grubby as she looked, nothing like rose water. 

Chapter 16: Small Bites

“Leeches?” Henry, curious, stepped closer. Sure enough, the glass jars held leeches, not worms. “I don’t recall leeches as part of New York and Chicago’s polite society, but perhaps the rules are different here at Simons Mansion.”

Chapter 17: In Which a Discourse Arises Between Dr. Parks and Little Marie

For the Grim Reaper stood ready with his scythe, and he cast a wide veil over their hope, even though they’d put their whole strength at keeping George Clare on the green side of life.

Chapter 18: Bad Fruit

Henry ravenously tore into one body after another. Kellen squatted on Henry’s death chair, like a frog preparing to catch flies, and urged Henry and John to hurry with rude, sarcastic remarks: “Come on, eat up!” “Don’t let anyone go to waste!” “This will help you grow big and strong!” and “Tastes just like chicken!”

Chapter 19: Man to Man

Just one glance at Dr. Parks’ companion, and Marie immediately knew Death had an enemy, a force more robust, more sinister than Death had yet encountered, a force that smelled, not of brimstone, but of aromatic pipe tobacco.

Chapter 20: Father of Lies

He paused at the Schwechten, tracing a gaunt finger through its burr walnut swirls as if noticing them for the first time. He and his piano: both well-played. 

Chapter 21: Sabbath Day

“I used to dream,” Luther said. Then he cocked his wrist and flicked the rock across the lake. It skipped, skipped, skipped, skipped, leaving widening circles in its wake. “But I don’t anymore.” He looked pointedly at Marie. “And If you wish to live at ease with yourself, I advise you to do the same.”

Chapter 22: Thorns with Poison

I know you are quite alone in the world, and that you are in-dependent and freethinking, but even modern women need to con-sider their reputations, and you are no exception, especially since “he” appears to have no regard for it at all.

Chapter 23: The Dead Man Rises

George’s shoulders sagged, and he ran a trembling hand through his hair. “Can you not look at me? Because you see a monster?”

Chapter 24: Drawing Back the Moon

“The grieving John Simons,” Dr. Gothart remarked to Kellen one night. “Each note perfectly executed and devoid of warmth, like chimes of ice.”

Chapter 25: The Prodigal So

Today, he was both doctor and patient, and the latter filled him with dread and unease. He’d rather strip naked and strut across Main Street than bare his soul. Vulnerability did not suit him.

Chapter 26: Redefining Life

Great. Flashbacks. That’s what Henry needed right now, a visit from the Ghost of his Evansville Past. Henry was dead; Horace wanted to be dead, and Henry was here to get the job done, not stroll down Memory Lane.

Chapter 27: Scrap Tossed to the Winds

Mostly, the essence of her papa’s vibrancy was gone. Marie saw what the others did not: a semi-forced gaiety. He no longer had hope in his eyes. Just the color blue.

Chapter 28: A New Gastronomy

He kept one eye on the next step in the recipes while nibbling here, tasting there, and licking his fingers, as any cook secretly does when no one is watching.

Chapter 29: Hope and a Future

Whereas some men had intelligence and skill, Dr. Parks also had discernment. And where some physicians recovered the bodily health of their patients, Dr. Parks restored the entire man. She knew why people condemned his vivisectionist activities. One can’t see into a person without inflicting pain. Stay on the surface, be at ease, as Luther might say. But then never be whole.

Chapter 30: The Wolf Shall Dwell With The Lamb

He thought of Pa, so like the illustration of a reed from an old botany textbook: slender, bendable to winds of misfortune, and, like any invasive species, equipped with a tenacious ability for survival by suppressing competitors, including his own family, wherever he rooted himself. Pa took what he wanted, including Henry’s mother. 

Epilogue

Except for the royal blue and dark hair, she was a miniature replica of her mother, and she stopped and looked up at him from beneath the brim of her regal hat, and the look was blank and devoid of connection. It wasn’t trusting. It wasn’t knowing. It wasn’t a look of anticipation for the future or thankfulness for his role in facilitating that future. It was simply a look.





Monday, July 5, 2021

Review: "Before The Blood: John Simons"

I'm a pretty low-key author as far as marketing and promotions go, and I have several reasons for that.

But every now and then, I get a sincere review.

Here is my first review on Goodreads for the first installment of Before The Blood.

And it's jsut my second review for the book, too (one is on Amazon), so it made me happy.

Here it is for you to enjoy today.

“It was amazing”

“I don't usually read in this genre, but I was intrigued by the premise of this book. It's the first novel in a five-novel prequel to another, three-novel series. 

“In Book I, which takes place in 1870s and 1880s, the reader is introduced to John Simons. He's got a pretty cushy life growing up, living in NYC and summering in CT, but his home life is strained. When he discovers his ability to play the piano and compose music, his life changes. 

“Through a series of plot twists and turns that kept me turning the pages, John leaves his life of wealth to live and work as a musician in poverty-stricken lower Manhattan. Another series of events and circumstances beyond his control results in John's life and livelihood bottoming out. 

“And then, out of nowhere on a fog-shrouded night when he is at his lowest, John is given an opportunity to achieve world-wide musical renown and riches. But it comes at a huge cost. 

“What intrigued me about the book is the question "As an artist, what would I give for success?" But I don't think it's a question only for artists; it's a question for everyone. 

“When I finished the last line and closed the book, I thought about the question, and my own answer/s, for a long time.






Wednesday, March 31, 2021

Pandemic Project - Proof Copy is on its Way

Like many people in 2020, I spent most of my time at home.

Unlike many people of 2020, I spent most of that time in one room because my bedroom and my office share a single space.

But even on weekends, I remained in that room because my hobby is writing fiction. In my case, the truth is, perhaps, stranger than fiction.

A couple years ago, I had an idea for a new BryonySeries trilogy called Limbo. I wanted to explore the movement and growth among the people in a place where progress, for the most part, just stops - with the overarching theme of rebirth.

So I outlined the series and then, when I used the rest of my vacation time in December 2019, I outlined the first book, confident I could write all of the first draft 2020 (which I did).

The first book in the series, called The Phoenix, explores that theme in two parallel stories in a late nineteenth century fishing village.

One story (the odd chapters) is about a twelve-year-old girl who is stuck inside one room at Munsonville Inn with her parents. The family lives "on the move" (supported by the mother's money) as the father chases one story after another, hoping to break into journalism into a big way. 

He's mostly hindered by a recurring illness that winds up making him deathly ill. And his wife, while his biggest supporter, is his biggest enabler. Their daughter has learned to mentally grow up fast. She's (mostly) a detached, unsmiling observor to the entire situation.

The second story (the even chapters) is about two newly turned vampires who are trying to figure out their new non-life from the confines of a mansion in the same village. They initually dine in the villagers (who are already reeling from the loss of life from a previous tragedy), and those villagers attribute these new deaths to a mysterious illness. So, for their protection, people are told to stay home.

Of course, they continue to die. Until, early on in the book, the vampires are ordered to find food elsewhere.

Yes, I had chosen to write a quarantine-type of story in what turned out to be a quarantine type of year. 

So while I spent my work time writing COVID stories, I spent my down time writing about illness and sheltering in place. The irony struck me one day as I was working on the novel.

But I did finish it before the holidays and sent it to my editor. I've incorporated (most) of her suggestions.

Topher Gleason created the cover art last year and Rebekah created the cover and learned a new skill to do something a little different with the formatting.

And now, the proof copy is on its way and should be here by Monday.