Showing posts with label Melissa Marchellis. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Melissa Marchellis. Show all posts

Tuesday, May 9, 2023

The Servant's Cottage

When I saw this artwork by Terri Ellinger on Facebook, I wanted it immediately.

To me, the scene leaps right out of the pages of Bryony, since it suggests so many elements: the old remodeled servant's cottage behind Simons Mansion near the woods and Melissa's bicycle, her main form of transportation.

So I reached out to Terri, and she sent me a digital copy I could use for marketing, since she wanted to sell the matted version. 

This was very kind of Terri. But I really wanted to buy the matted version to hang on my wall.




If you're not familiar with Terri's art, she created the pen and ink drawings that are part of several books in the BryonySeries Bertrand the Mouse subseries.

I have more pieces in this album of Terri Ellinger's work on the BryonySeries Facebook page, back when I hosted an art show at the Book and Bean Cafe in Joliet for four of the BryonySeries artists.


So Terri sold the "servant's cottage" piece to me and then shipped it to me. It arrived yesterday, and I'm very, very happy with it.

To see more of Terri's artwork, visit sites.google.com/view/terriellingerfineart




Thursday, April 8, 2021

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Timothy's First Chocolate Carving

 It doesn't seen that long ago when Timothy, now a corporate chef, was just learning the basics of culinary.

And for just learning the "basics," that's a pretty good carving of Melissa.

I've posted the book cover of Bryony at the bottom of this blog, so you can compare the faces.

Monday, April 23, 2012

"Melissa" carved in "Chocolate

1 comment:

Denise M. Baran-Unland said...

A homework assignment for one of my sons, Timothy Baran, a Joliet Junior College culinary arts student.
He had to carve "something" into chocolate, so he picked the cover of "Bryony" for his inspiration.
Not pictured: the wood bark impression on the back of the chocolate block.

Thursday, February 27, 2020

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Leeches 101

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Leeches 101


During Melissa’s first day at Munsonville School, Ann Dalton compares their biology teacher, a former scientist, to H.G. Wells’ Dr. Moreau. That’s because Mr. Walczak, through his retained laboratory connections, brought all manner of interesting specimens to class, including a two-headed fish and a vampire bat.


So when Mr. Walczak collects a jar of leeches from Lake Munson, Melissa is fascinated at the close-up view at the grotesque creatures, although Jack Cooper, who grew up in a fishing boat with his father, is bored.

Perhaps Mr. Walczak’s connections included Biopharm (http://www.biopharm-leeches.com/), an international company, established in 1812 and based in South Wales, UK. His knowledge of leeches certainly suggests it.

According to the company website, Biopharm is the first leech farm of its kind. It produces, in a sterile environment, the majority of leeches used in modern medicine worldwide. Thank you, Biopharm, for sharing your interesting collection of leech facts.

· There are 650 known species of leeches.
· The largest leech discovered measured eighteen inches.
· About one fifth of leech species live in the sea where they feed on fish.
· The leech has thirty-two brains, thirty-one more than a human.
· The Hirudo Medicinalis is the leech mostly used in plastic and reconstructive surgery.
· The Hirudo leech lays its babies within a cocoon; whereas the Amazon leech carries its babies—sometimes as many as three hundred--on its stomach.
· Not all leeches are bloodsuckers. Many are predators, which eat earthworms. Ironically the nearest relatives of leeches are earthworms.
· The Hirudo leech has three jaws with one hundred teeth on each jaw, making three hundred teeth in all.
· The Amazon leech uses a different method of sucking blood. They insert a long proboscis into the victim, as opposed to biting.
· The bite of a leech is painless due to its own anesthetic.
· The Hirudo injects an anti-coagulant serum into the victim to prevent blood clotting.
· The leech will gorge itself until full, sometimes up to five times its body weight, and then just fall away from its victim.
· After the Hirudo leech drops off, the wound it leaves will bleed, on average, for ten hours.
· The first leech was used in medicine about 1000 B.C, probably in ancient India.
· Wales was once one of the major leech collecting areas of Europe. People would stand in lakes and pools and, when the leech attached to their legs, they would put them in their baskets and sell them.
· The original surgeons were barbers that used leeches to cure anything from headaches to gout. The red and white stripe traditionally seen on a barber pole began when surgeons hung their bandages on a pole outside their shops.
· Biopharm leeches have helped save the limbs of patients in twenty-nine different countries.
· By extracting the anti-clotting serum for the leech, researchers are isolating new pharmaceutical compounds for eventual treatment of heart diseases.
· The nervous system of the leech is very similar to the human nervous system and is of enormous benefit to researchers in their quest for the answers to human problems.

(Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony").

Tuesday, January 28, 2020

Bryony Spool Journal

This past summer, local author and BryonySeries artist Sue Midlock had an idea for an art project related to our books.

Sue had seen examples of spool art, wanted to make one for her book Elspeth, and invited Rebekah and I to make one, too, focusing on Bryony.






She had all the supplies except for the basic wooden spool, which her husband, a woodworker, made for us.






Basically, we paint a strip of paper (in our case, we painted two and connected them with ribbon that "spoke" of our respective books, in order to make a longer scroll) and then we added prose and decor, the last supplied by Sue's large collection of art supplies.






It reminded me of a major project I did with my teen Sunday school class at St. Nicholas, where I brought out everything from the art cabinets and let their imagination free.

Sue wrote and illustrated vignettes that summarized Elspeth. I used quotes from both Bryony and the fifth installment of Before The Blood, which focuses on Bryony Simons.





In Bryony, Melissa trades her blood with a Victorian vampire (John Simons) to go back into time to "be" Bryony.




On the other hand, the fifth installment of Before The Blood, is the real adult Bryony and her marriage to John, before he was dead and undead.

So one side of the scroll are Melissa quotes. The others are Bryony's, bound together by a ribbon and with the whole decorated with the specially bred bryony vines in the series and other subtle elements contained therein.




The ends are also decorated with themes that appear in both Bryony...



...and Before The Blood: Bryony Simons




Even the "tags" at the end related to Before The Blood: If you've read the book, you'll recognize them.




Thursday, August 1, 2019

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: That Lightening Bolt Moment

Monday, August 2, 2010

That Lightening Bolt Moment

Okay, maybe it was not that dramatic.


On one of the first days of 1985, I laid on the couch trying to combat pregnancy nausea with a book of classic vampire stories. My two year old and eight month old were napping at the same time, a highly unusual occurrence. I laid the book upside down on my chest and decided to write a gothicy-style vampire novel.


Now, I had never written a novel, only short stories and one novella. Nor had I even written much fiction since my junior high school days, thanks to a series of illnesses in high school and a killer schedule in college. Since becoming a parent, I had not even read much fiction. I preferred the Bible, as well as books on pregnancy, childbirth, Cesarean sections (I've had six total), home birth (I've had none), breastfeeding (infants, toddlers, through pregnancy, and tandem), Christian parenting, and homeschooling.


Yet, by the time the kiddies had awakened, and I was soaping washcloths for diaper changes (Yes, I used cloth diapers, by choice), I had the rudiments of s story--a teenage girl falls in love with a vampire she meets by a remote lake--flowing through my mind.


Of course, the main character would be Melissa. That had been my name of choice for numerous childhood stories. Finally, Melissa would star in her "official" story. I decided to set her story in 1972 (I later changed it to 1975 simply because I wanted Halloween on a Friday) to give expansion room to the story. It was a slow growth.


The raising of six, lively, breastfed, homeschooled children left little time for writing. Drafts attempted in locked, toddler-proofed rooms offered little concentration. Those adorable little people who shared the space were more interested in tapping typewriting keys than playing with all the lovely, educational toys strewn on the floor. Many, many deleted scenes found their home in some landfill.


Yet, while other stories ideas have come and gone, this particular one would not go away. Finally, in 2007, I decided to write it as a novella for the seventeenth birthday of one of my sons. I figured it could write it in a weekend. I was wrong.

Posted by Denise M. Baran-Unland at 12:19 AM



Monday, December 10, 2018

A Very BryonySeries Christmas: Excerpt No. 1

Below is an except from Bryony, the first book in the BryonySeries trilogy.


At breakfast, her mother said they were going Christmas shopping in Jenson.

“It’s like a funeral around here.” She looked at Melissa and Brian’s dismal faces and tried to sound upbeat. “Heaven knows we’ve certainly had enough of those.”

“I don’t feel like Christmas shopping.” Head in hand, Brian stirred his cereal around in his bowl, but he ate very little of it. Some of it sloshed over the sides, but no one said anything.

“Me, neither,” Melissa said.

“We need to get out of the house,” Darlene said. “We can mope in Jenson.”

Back in Grover’s Park, one couldn’t miss the start of the holiday season. Garland angels topped streetlights, store windows delivered Christmas surprises with every glimpse, and a giant tree graced the center of town, which the mayor dedicated and lit with grand solemnity each Thanksgiving weekend at the conclusion of the annual Step Into Christmas parade.

Munsonville’s Main Street showcased none of that glamour. There was no elaborate décor and no signs advertising sale items for those special Christmas gifts.

True, someone ran a strand of blinking lights around the perimeter of the picture window of Sue’s Diner, and Ann’s mother hung a wreath on the front door of Dalton’s Dry Goods, but those flaccid decorating attempts scarcely hinted that Christmas fast approached, which suited Melissa, for she felt no holiday spirit. She gazed at the tiny tree flaunting the front porch of the general store, then realized, with sudden astonishment, in all these months she had lived in Munsonville, she had never gone inside that building.

When Melissa’s father was alive, her mother shopped and ran errands once a week, while Melissa and Brian completed their homework under their father’s watchful eye. Shopping, for Melissa, meant going to the Grover’s Park mall with her friends, so even accompanying her mother to the supermarket had never entered Melissa’s mind.

Here, she was so engrossed in John that mundane, daily tasks escaped her. Did her mother shop in town while Melissa and Brian were in school, or had Steve, who did most of the cooking, buy their food?

Melissa wished that, with Munsonville behind them, she could banish depressing thoughts for an afternoon, but driving through the desolate countryside reminded Melissa of her carriage ride with Henry, only a week ago. The barren landscape intensified Melissa’s ache for roses and firewood, the delicate fragrance of wildflowers on a summer afternoon, and the mouthwatering smells of a Simons Mansion dinner.

Thirty minutes later, Melissa was amidst the crowds who packed downtown Jenson seeking last minute bargains. Her mother rode around the block searching for a parking place. After the third trip, she squeezed the station wagon between two pick-up trucks. The car behind her blasted its horn.

“I think that man wanted your space, Mom,” Brian said.

“Tough!” Darlene said, with uncharacteristic sharpness. “Remind me to come back in two hours,” she added, softening. “I’ll have to put more change in the meter.”

While waiting for the traffic light to change, their mother put her arms around Melissa and Brian and hugged them.

“I’m really sorry I spoke that way, kids,” Darlene said. “It wasn’t a very good example. I know we’re not in the Christmas mood, but let’s have a good time anyway.”

No one answered her.

Store windows boasted colorful Christmas decorations, more like Grover’s Park than Munsonville, but to Melissa, they were hardly worth a second glance. One store featured eight, very tiny reindeer pulling a sleigh filled with toys, while Santa waved a mechanical arm at shoppers. Another window offered a winter wonderland of snowflakes, snowmen, snowwomen, and mitten-clad dolls engaged in a mock snowball fight. A third was full of games, trucks, and dolls, flanked by colorful packages tied with shiny bows and stacked in groups of threes, fours, and fives.

On nearly every street corner, a Santa Claus rang a bell, and shoppers dropped coins into his bucket.

“Merry Christmas!” Santa called to each one, as he distributed candy canes.

“It’s to help the poor people,” Melissa said to Brian.

“I know,” Brian said.

They weaved aimlessly through the mob. The cold and gray stamped out hope. At first, Melissa wished it would snow, for flurries would mask the dreary sky, until she recalled the eighty-year-old carriage house lodging where, somewhere in the past, it held a brand-new, eighty-year-old sleigh. John pledged a sleigh ride through the woods on the day of the first snow. Would he still keep that promise?

“Wait!” Brian said.

He stopped outside a large window. An electric train ran around the tracks of a North Pole scene. He stood there, mesmerized by the sleek cars winding up hills, through tunnels, and around lakes.

“Boy, Steve and I could have some fun with this,” Brian said, then stopped. He turned away from the window, and Melissa avoided his crestfallen face.

“Let’s go inside,” Darlene said, putting her arm around his shoulders and drawing him close to her. To Melissa’s surprise, Brian let her.

They meandered up and down the aisles, pretending to look at rows of toys. Melissa ignored the collector Victorian dolls. Her mother did not have to tell Brian to keep his hands to himself.

“I want to go home,” Brian whined.

“Let’s get some hot chocolate,” Darlene quickly said.

They left the store and trudged to a small restaurant. Although not yet lunchtime, shoppers filled the dining area. They found a table in the back, near the kitchen, amidst the banging of frying pans. Her mother ordered three hot chocolates topped with mounds of whipped cream. In the past, pausing in their holiday activities to get warm and drink hot chocolate was a cherished tradition. Now, no one cared.

“This isn’t very good hot chocolate,” Melissa said, to no one in particular.

The speakers in the diner played a children’s chorus singing, Jingle Bells, mocking Melissa with the thrill of horse-drawn sleigh rides. Brian didn’t eat the whipped cream with his fingers. Darlene paid the bill, and they left half-full cups.

As they plodded along the sidewalk, Melissa had an idea that cheered her slightly. She fell behind her mother and poked Brian in the ribs.

“We should get Mom something,” she said, “for Christmas.”

Brian perked up. “I have some allowance money left.”

Her mother’s face brightened when Melissa suggested stopping at the bookstore.

Brian scoured a new comic book. Melissa lingered by an exhibit of hardcover books. Darlene browsed the shelves.

“What are you looking at, Liss?” Brian asked, the crook of a candy cane hanging from his mouth.

“Where’d you get that?”

“Santa,” he said and pointed to the man standing on the corner. “I dropped a quarter in the bucket.”

Under New Releases, Melissa pointed to the title capturing her attention: The Prosecutor Rests and Other Short Stories by Harold Masters.

“Doesn’t he teach at our school?” Brian licked his sticky fingers.

“He did, until last week. Mom likes to read his books, and she doesn’t have this one. Maybe, a good book would get her mind off stuff.”

“Okay, let’s get it.”

She mostly wanted to distract her mother, and yet, Melissa found herself stroking the book jacket. She knew Henry hadn’t touched it, but somehow, holding the words he wrote made her feel closer to him. When she stopped, Melisa noticed Brian’s queer stare.

While they stood in line to pay for the book, Brian picked out a large piece of foil-wrapped chocolate, decorated like a tree ornament, to accompany the gift. “We can tape it on the book when we wrap it,” he said.

The clerk handed Melissa the bag, just as their mother approached the front of the store. Brian waved at her, and she wound her way through the crowds to reach them.

“Well,” Darlene said, with an exuberance Melissa suspected she did not feel. “I’m glad to see you have a dash of Christmas spirit in you, after all.

“No peeking,” Brian warned her.

They left Jenson before the meter time expired. When they returned home, Brian insisted on grabbing the bag. Melissa didn’t argue with him. She was in no mood for wrapping Christmas presents. They had driven past Simons Mansion twice that day, and twice Melissa had closed her eyes against the royal, old building, once full of future assurance. How could she tolerate living here? Why had her vampires forsaken her? Sleep that night was hollow and restless. Twice, Melissa woke and checked her clock. She flipped over her pillow and sleep dragged her into a woozy, ghastly marsh of silhouettes spewing unintelligible wails until they became barks. Scooter!

Melissa rose to let him outside, but when she opened the patio door, Scooter was a Newfoundland. His face twisted in demonic fury, and he growled and bared his fangs at her before disappearing among the naked trees and into the chilly night. Melissa grabbed a flashlight and her heavy coat, then stepped outside.

“Scooter!”

A faint, screeching bark answered her, and the landscape changed.



Photo by Timothy Baran

Thursday, August 30, 2018

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Only a Dream by Sarah Stegall

Monday, October 11, 2010

Only a Dream?

According to http://www.wikipedia.com/, a dream is a succession of emotions, images, or sounds that the mind experiences during sleep. The content and purpose of dreams are not fully understood, though they have been a topic of interest and speculation throughout recorded history.

Just about everybody dreams. Most of us can recall dreams from different periods of our lives. Some of us even remember a dream from last night. Dreaming happens different for everyone, though science recognizes it usually occurs during the sleep stage of Rapid Eye Movement, or REM.

I believe, for myself, that when I dream it's my subconsciousness working out things my awake self didn't or couldn't deal with. You might disagree. I've learned that dream interpretation has an enormous berth. Recently, I noticed my daily stress has been rolling into my sleep.

I had a very disturbing dream just last night. The progression of the dream made no sense, yet my dream self knew exactly what I should be doing at all points of the dream. Only it wasn't a dream. It was more like a waking nightmare. I'm not really keen with sharing the details so I'll just give you the dynamics. Someone was dying, I couldn't stop it, and right before the dream should end, the face of the dying person was replaced with someone I'd give my life for. Even worse, the details of this dream really stood out.

All day today I've had this dream in the back of my mind. When I broke it down it was almost humorous! The beads of sweat I so clearly remember, turned out to be some drool. The password for the computer in my dream turned out to be the last thing I was thinking of last night. I also believe I gave my blanket a very awesome back rub. I realize my stresses were just amplified.

Other aspects I've come across are: I normally don't remember dreams and the ones that stand out are the ones that happen right before I awake. Sure I've had a few where I wake up in a sweat in the middle of the night, but those are ones where I don't remember much and I eventually nod back off over a book.

This post is quite relevant to Bryony, because Melissa relives a life that isn't hers during the nights. She is faced with lucid dreams or wild hallucinations. Melissa is unsure whose version of events she's dreaming of or if they are even dreams because they seem so real. Denise's manuscript is full of clues that lead the readers into making their own assumptions as to what happens. If you dream tonight, ask yourself in the morning, "Is it only a dream?"

Sunday, February 18, 2018

Sue's Diner: Meatloaf by Janet Cooney

In Bryony, Melissa and Brian are stunned when their mother announces they will be traveling to Detroit for their grandmother’s memorial service. 

Brian, however, is more astonished at Melissa’s increased appetite, especially when she asks for extra helpings of this extra-special meatloaf.

Find the recipe HERE




From "Memories in the Kitchen: Bites and Nibbles From 'Bryony'"

All proceeds benefit Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties. www.bbbswillgrundy.org.

Order the cookbook at www.bryonyseries.com.







Thursday, June 1, 2017

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Dress Like Melissa

Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Dress Like Melissa

Although Bryony contains a few descriptions of how Melissa and her friends dressed in 1975--with the exception of Kimberly, this was mostly jeans, T-shirts, and sweaters--the book gives much more attention to Victorian fashion. Since the story is told through Melissa's perspective, she naturally is more aware of the unusual clothing than her everyday wear.

However, especially for the younger reader, if you're curious about what else teen '70's girls (and boys) wore, check out this link.

www.thepeoplehistory.com/1970skidsfashion.html

Tuesday, August 2, 2016

Capture the Mood

Yesterday I had lunch with an author friend who also writes and publishes her young adult vampire stories.

She brought along her work-in-progress and asked me to read over a sensuous scene. She was trying to keep the right balance between making the reader feel the moment without being explicit.

She nailed it.

Now in adult novels, authors have more freedom in the specific details. But the basics still hold true.

One mistake we writers sometimes make in writing scenes with any sort of sexual tension is focusing in the physical details. As I told my friend, those details are, overall, fairly consistent, if one really thinks about it.

However, an individual's response, their emotions, their thoughts, as the action escalates (or does not), is what makes the difference. And an implication or hints of graphic can be more impactful than blunt words.

Here's the example I shared with her from Visage:


John stayed just as quiet on the return trip. Tonight, however, he did not pull into the back of the cafeteria. Instead, he swung the car into the staff parking lot and stopped at the far end, in front of the tall hedges bordering the empty road.
“I’ll walk you to the building,” John said. “The car’s staying here overnight.”
“How will you get home?” Melissa asked in surprise.
“I live across the street.”
“Then why do you…?”
“Drive to work? I don’t always go straight home.”
Melissa’s face grew hot. She knew that. He went to Shelby, of course. She blindly groped for the door handle. She had to leave, now, even if only to hide the bitter disappointment and frustration filling her eyes. She had misjudged John’s intentions again! Why did she keep torturing herself?
“Melissa, stop.”
He leaned near, cupped her face with one hand, and gently turned her. Melissa quickly blinked away tears and melted into John’s warm fingers. Her mind whirled. It’s a dream, she told herself, expecting to awaken in the next moment. This is just a twisted Bryony dream. The hazy light from the distant lamp pole illuminated the frenzy in John’s eyes as they searched hers. Melissa sat rigid, scarcely breathing, anticipating the impending jangling of her alarm clock.
“It’s strange,” John said, “but I feel we’ve met in another place, or....
John paused and inched closer. “....another time.”
Melissa throat tightened. The stillness of the night roared in her ears. John’s breath grazed her mouth.
“Does that make sense to you?”
She nodded, too astounded for words, petrified she’d pierce the elusive magic. Sleep, sleep, stay asleep, she silently begged, as John closed his eyes and swept a feathery stroke across her lips. This can’t be happening, Melissa thought. Oh, God, this is real!
Taking her head in his hands, John kissed her in earnest this time, gently, then harder and faster until Melissa released her pent up desire for John and met those kisses with a fervor that astonished her.
She touched his face and ran her fingers through that glorious hair, then to his shirt and down, farther than she had ever touched him, not even in Munsonville, not even when she was playing Bryony. By the time John opened his eyes and smiled at her, Melissa knew what she wanted to know.
If John Simotes had ever been a vampire, he wasn’t one now.

Monday, June 13, 2016

Melissa's Vampire Research

The information below is from the fictiona Creatures of the Night: Witches, Werewolves, and Vampires, which Melissa checked out from the Munsonville Public Library to learn more about her nocturnal visitor.

FYI: These "facts" are carried through the entire BryonySeries.


A vampire is a former human that relentlessly seeks fresh human blood. Sources include the victim’s neck, cheek, thigh, fingers, toes, or below the heart.

By day, vampires repose in their burial places; at night, they rise to feed, either to kill or control. Once under the vampire’s power, the victim joyfully welcomes the attack. The vampire may now come and go, as he pleases.

Vampires by murder or suicide retain human traits, most notably a certain passion for life…sharp teeth appear only when feeding…bright red blood may trickle around the mouth…vampires may consume solid food, but must expel it later… experienced vampires tolerate small amounts of sunlight, although it decreases their abilities…vampires travel silently…vampires are expert shape-shifters. Common manifestations include wolves, bats, rats, other humans, and mist.

Sometimes, vampires penetrate dreams.

As predators, vampires possess keen senses, formidable strength, and fantastic speed, enabling them to teleport to other eras and locations.

Vampires are wise…they exude sexual charm, control animals, and read minds… for a reliable slaying, drive an oak stake through a vampire’s heart and sever its head with a silver dagger.






Thursday, June 2, 2016

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Early Deletions


Monday, November 8, 2010

Early Deletions

Early Deletions:

Nearly every story goes through some changes during the editing process, a good thing, too. I shudder to think what elements might have remained had I written Bryony twenty years ago.

* Snowbell would have been Melissa’s cat.
* Melissa would have wandered the grounds at Simons Mansion searching for the cat while her mother and Brian had left her home alone in favor of the movies (There are no movie theaters in Munsonville. Besides, what parent would leave her fourteen year old home alone at night in the middle of the woods)?
* Henry Matthews would have resembled Sebastian Cabot’s Mr. French fromthe 1960’s television show, A Family Affair. He would have been sagely, not charming (GACK!).
* John Simons would have been dark and slender, sort of the way Melissa dreams him in the Grover’s Park house (You’ll have to wait for the book to read that part).
* Fr. Alexis would have vampire slaying powers.
* Melissa would have first met John near Lake Munson, not realizing he was a vampire.
* Simons Mansion would have existed only in Melissa’s dreams.
* Melissa would have become a critically ill, unwed mother.

Denise M. Baran-Unland

Thursday, April 7, 2016

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: Cost of Living in 1975 and Other Fun Facts


Monday, June 18, 2012

Cost of Living in 1975 and Other Fun Facts

Was the cost of living ever really that much simpler and cheaper for Melissa Marchellis' family than it is for us today? Check out these figures and then decide:

Average Cost of new house : $39,300.00 
Average Income per year: $14,100.00 
Average Monthly Rent:   $200.00
Cost of a gallon of Gas:   44 cents 
Average cost new car: $4,250.00
Foster Grant Sun Glasses:   $5.00

From www.thepeoplehistory.com/1975.html

Sunday, November 22, 2015

Darlene’s Hot Chocolate

In my section of the world, today is BRRRRRRRRRRRR...

Just the day to curl up in a chair with a book, blanket, and kitten, sipping the hot chocolate I've prepared for my family for over three deceades. In fact, it's exactly the way Melissa's mother makes it.


It’s hard to concentrate on homework when mourning the loss of one’s father, grandmother, friend, and even her dog. Melissa didn’t think a steaming mug of hot chocolate in her favorite purple mug could make a difference, but it did. Cuddling and talking with her mother, helped, too.

 Darlene’s Hot Chocolate
By Denise M. Baran-Unland

¼ cup cocoa
½ cup sugar
1/3 cup water
2 cups milk
1 teaspoon vanilla
Vanilla ice cream (optional)

Combine cocoa and sugar; add water and stir. Heat until mixture simmers. Add milk, stir again, and heat until sugar/cocoa mixture is dissolved. Remove from heat, add vanilla, stir, and serve. Good topped with ice cream. Yield: 4 servings.


 From "Memories in the Kitchen: Bites and Nibbles From 'Bryony'"

All proceeds benefit Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties. www.bbbswillgrundy.org.


Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Writing Sexual Tension


When I first started writing Bryony, I read a post about how editors often cringe at sex scenes beause so many of them are so badly written. 

For many writers, writing romantic/sexual tension is difficult for two reasons: we're embarrassed, and we focus on "the deed."

However, despite the many variations one can find in books and online, "the deed" is still fairly universal and straightforward, despite the temptation to purple-prose it up with really awful mataphors. However, the thoughts, feelings, responses, and value judgments of the characters involved, well, these are as indivudual as the characters.

Building good tension takes time, more than even the excerpts here, but these are offered merely to get your creative juices flowing (cliche, pun intended). Elements of that tension may include past frustration, longing, anticipation, and knowing your audience. The particular details of tension in a young adult book is different from one that is triple x, but the foundational feelings are the same.




John wrapped his arms around Melissa, and all her trepidation melted. He felt so strong, so solid, so protecting. Was this magical moment part of his covenant to her? It was beyond her wildest dreams. How could she ever have mistrusted him? She looked up at John and saw he waited for her answer. Why would a man this talented and wonderful look at her in that way? His face moved closer to hers, and his lips were very near. ("Bryony," Chapter 12: A Fair Trade)




John admitted he had not, but his tone was flat, and Melissa wondered if he had really heard her. The more Melissa talked, the less John heeded her words. Several times, John’s eyes drifted away from Melissa’s face and roamed the rest of her in a manner that caught her breath and halted her speech. His smiles grew less bright and more distracted. Finally, Melissa’s voice trailed into nothingness. John brought forth his watch, noted the time, and repacked the remains. Melissa bit her lip, but what could she do?

Instead of lugging the basket to the boat, John pushed it to the edge of the blanket. With a brief stretch, John lay down, looked at Melissa, and patted a spot on the blanket next to him. His face appeared tranquil, but his eyes held a yearning, almost hungry, look that nearly smothered her. This was it. She couldn’t refuse him now.

Fairly bursting with happiness, Melissa inched away from her place on the blanket and lay next to him. John covered her hand with his, but he did not speak or glance at her. Neither one moved, but every so often, John’s fingertips caressed her skin. They lay there in silence, watching the shadows of the trees lengthen, and the sun dip lower in the sky, exploding into vibrant reds, yellows, and oranges. Gradually, night settled over Lake Munson, and the brilliant colors darkened into purples and blues, but still Melissa felt no urge to leave for Simons Mansion. She only wished this moment would last forever because, although John still did not talk, neither did he release her hand. Feeling more serene than she had in a long time, Melissa closed her eyes and allowed the approaching night to wrap her into its comforting cocoon. She was afraid to respond; she was unwilling to break its magic. Instead, Melissa listened to the lake dashing itself against the shore. She heard the distant call of an unknown bird. John’s breathing sounded steady and rhythmical. She wondered if he had fallen asleep.

Without warning, John’s fingers traveled up her arm, past her shoulder, and to her neck. They stopped at the base of her throat and rested there, warm, unmoving. Melissa melted into his touch, unable to tell where she began, and his fingers ended. ("Bryony," Chapter 24: It's No Use)



Head held high, Melissa strutted out the door and toward the stairs. However, as she drew close to the security entrance, Melissa’s legs began shaking so hard, she curled her toes to keep from buckling. She stumbled to the door with as much dignity as she could muster and willed her chattering teeth to be still. The security guard, an upperclassman with several textbooks spread out before him, didn’t notice Melissa’s distress. Melissa glanced at her watch. Ten minutes to go. She leaned against the wall and ordered her racing heart to behave. Tonight, Melissa would have no rehearsed Bryony script to guide her. What would she say? How should she act? She checked her watch again. Nine minutes to go! She half-expected to see Henry in a three-piece midnight blue suit stroll through the door, apologize for the professor’s tardiness, and then announce he was the substitute date for the night. Oh, what was taking Johnny so long? ("Visage," Chapter 4: Outdated)


Suppressing a sigh, Melissa reached for the door handle, but John, with a quick dart of his eyes, leaned his hand across the back of her seat and locked the door. Melissa held her breath, but the pounding in her ears was deafening. Melissa closed her eyes, and time stopped.
She heard a click, then a creak, and her eyes flew open. John had unlocked Melissa’s door and was now offering his hand. John grew blurry against tears of disappointment. Do not cry, Melissa told herself.
“Thanks,” she mumbled, forcing a cheerful smile while taking his hand, reveling in the warmth of his fingers and trying to act unruffled by the contact. She failed.
“Say ‘hello’ when you pass me.”
“Will do.”
Melissa paused. Again, nothing happened. As she started toward the cafeteria door, John gently caught her wrist. She stopped. Heart racing, she turned to look at him. He slowly moved his eyes along her face and farther down, then back up again. It was how John had looked at her the night of orientation; it was the way he had gazed at Bryony when he lifted her veil. Melissa could not breathe.
("Visage," Chapter 4: Outdated)


All day Monday, Melissa harnessed her will power and focused unwaveringly on her schoolwork. That night at closing time, as Melissa checked out a stack of books, Johnny Simotes walked through the front door. Melissa immediately dropped to the floor and pretended to search for something on the bottom shelf.
She counted to ten, stood up, and breathed a sigh of relief. The professor was gone. The student at the counter looked aghast at her queer behavior, grabbed his books, and nearly sprinted out the door.
Pat something, a tall, friendly girl with short brown layered hair, arranged books on a nearby cart for shelving. As she slid a stack off the counter to give to Pat, Melissa caught sight of Johnny walking to the desk with two books in his hand. Melissa spun around and quickly joined Pat.
“Um, I’ll handle these,” Melissa said in a low voice. “Why don’t you wait on him? You’ve been stuck doing this all night.”
Pat shrugged. “It doesn’t matter to me.” But she approached the professor just the same.
Melissa turned her back to counter and very slowly added her books to the cart. Johnny said something in tones so muted, Melissa only heard the sound of his voice.
“She’s busy at the moment,” Pat said.
“I’ll wait.”
Pat returned to the cart. “He’s asking for you.”
Melissa’s face burned. She glanced up. Mr. Schmidt was observing the exchange and frowning. He preached, and monitored for, sterling customer service, especially when the customer was a teacher. Melissa felt stuck. She had no option but to face the professor. Great.
She returned to the front desk, gave Johnny a polite, “Good evening,” and rapidly stamped his cards. Melissa noticed both books pertained to advanced music theory.
As Melissa slid a due date slip into the front pocket of the second book, Johnny placed his hand on hers. A flushing warmth flowed through her at his touch. All thought froze; every heartbeat hammered out a single syllable, John. Melissa forgot about Mr. Schmidt, Pat, the cartful of books, and her promises to forsake the Bryony fantasies. Nothing else mattered. John had made contact with her.
("Visage," Chapter 3: In The Shadow of Bryony)