Showing posts with label Steve Barnes. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Steve Barnes. Show all posts

Monday, October 4, 2021

Sue's Diner: Steve's Spaghetti Sauce

This week's recipe is a homemade spaghetti sauce that was submitted by one of the characters in the BryonySeries.

This recipe appears in the BryonySeries cookbook: Memories in the Kitchen: Bites and Nibbles from "Bryony," which is a permament fundraiser for Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties.

The recipe is referenced in the novel Bryonywhere the brother of the protagonist, 1970s teen named Melissa Marchellis, is being mentored by the village maintenance man, Steve Barnes. 

Steve helps Brian Marchellis with his homework, teaches him to cook, and provides a father figure after the death of Brian's father. Spaghetti topped with Steve's homemade spaghetti sauce is one of the meals the two make for dinner together.

You can try our modified recipe on the Sue's Diner page on the BryonySeries website.

But try the recipe this week. It will be gone some time next week. A new recipe will take it's place.



By the way, Sue's Diner is only real in the BryonySeries world. But didn't Timothy do a great job making the page look like a real menu at a vintage diner?

Here is the full diner page: bryonyseries.com/sue-s-diner. You can't really order, of course (wouldn't it be great if you could?).

For more BryonySeries recipes, check out our three cookbooks at our BryonySeries bryonyseries.com/general-store.

Wednesday, December 12, 2018

A Very BryonySeries Christmas: Excerpt No. 3

Below is an excerpt from Staked! the third book in the BryonySeries trilogy.



“Well now, John-Peter,” Steve said, “Are they straight?”
            
 John-Peter edged away from the tree, picked up his water jug, and studied the results. His grandfather hadn’t lost the knack for perfect lights. No crooked rows, no bare patches.
            
“It looks great, Grandpa,” John-Peter said.
            
“Then see if you can find the star while I check the chili and start the cornbread. Maybe we can get all the ornaments hung before lunch.”
            
“Ten-four.”
            
John-Peter gave the lights another approving look. The tree scented the entire room with pine, and it was, as Steve had said, a real beauty. It stood just shy enough from the ceiling to hold a topper and its lush, bluish branches partly obscured the room’s large picture window.
            
With less than a week left until Christmas, most people in Munsonville had their Christmas trees up and decorated, but not his grandfather. Steve wanted to maximize its freshness. He hadn't sent Jack to fetch it until yesterday.
             
John-Peter knelt on the floor by the smallest box and peeled back the tape. Nothing but the manger scene. He moved to another box. He was dying to go back to Eircheard’s, but an opportunity to do so would be long in coming. During Katie’s work hours, Karla now had to stay at her grandparents’ house. He wished Karla would hurry up and perfect teleportation. Then maybe she could figure out a way to get him back inside the pawn shop from their respective residences. That would thwart Katie’s control trip.
           
The star wasn’t in this box either. The boy scooted to the next box. What kind of portal had Cornell been seeking? And why did he think Eircheard could direct him to it?
            
An agitated Karla had called him that first night--once the mothers had finished their respective, loud venting--demanding an answer: Why did Eircheard have a leprechaun that matched the one John-Peter carried in his pocket?
            
“Maybe they were mass produced back in the 1960s, and Eircheard got lucky,” John-Peter had said, watching Bertrand swat at a tiny cheese cracker Karla hovered just out his reach.
            
“Will you get serious? Who'd want to buy such an ugly thing?” She tossed the cracker past the blocks, and Bertrand leaped over them in frantic pursuit of dinner. “I wonder what the words mean.”
            
 John-Peter leaned against the bed and clasped his hands behind his neck. “That's easy."
           
“You can read them?”
            
“Yes, ma’am.”
            
“So are you going to tell?”
            
“Bertrand wants another cracker.”
            
A shower of orange squares rattled onto the floor. Bertrand’s eyes bulged with delight, and he dove into the pile. “Satisfied?”
           
John-Peter ignored the smirk in her voice. “Remember how you said Cornell was looking for a portal, and Eircheard said something about doors?”
            
“Yeah, so?”
            
“’Cha d’dhuin doras nach d’fhosgail doras’ means ‘No door ever closed, but another opened."
            
Karla was quiet for a moment. “How do you know that?” The sarcastic tone was gone.
            
John-Peter closed his eyes and sleepiness sailed him to the top of a large oak tree where the wind rustled the leaves, and the boughs echoed with the hollow notes of Fawn’s tin whistle. He reopened his eyes, but the lids remained heavy, and he had to concentrate on forming the words.
           
“I’m not certain," John-Peter said slowly as he watched Bertrand enthusiastically nibbled a corner off one cracker, then another, and another. “I just know it.”
           
Still no star. He reached for the last box. Even before he unwrapped the first package, the boy felt points poking out of the newspaper. “Got it!”
             
The response from the kitchen was a loud clatter.
            
“Grandpa!”
            
Silence, scary silence.



Sunday, April 24, 2016

Introduction to Memories in the Kitchen: Bites and Nibbles from “Bryony.”


Why a cookbook?

Well, why NOT a cookbook?

Even before I began submitting Bryony to agents and small presses, my kids and I talked about all the fun, additional products the novel might inspire.

Although I’ll probably never see bendable dolls with their own line of clothing (too bad, since we could make a fortune on all those lost, little shoes) or a Simons Mansion dollhouse (I REALLY want one), the cookbook idea flourished inside me, especially after I wrote a story on what Kathy Carey did for March of Dimes..

For two decades, this remarkable woman participated in Grundy County's March of Dimes walk. In 2000, after a friend gave birth to a premature baby, Carey increased her efforts. She assisted the district coordinator. She contacted companies for donations and sponsorships. She re-routed the local walk to increase its visibility.

Three years ago, Carey read an advertisement for fundraising cookbooks. Although she owned no computer and had no previous cookbook experience, Carey sent for the information. She studied it closely and decided she could do it. She set a fundraising goal of $7,000 and calculated that she needed to sell 1,000 cookbooks to reach it. Carey peddled the books at local stores, craft shows and festivals until she sold them all.

Inspired by Carey's story, I decided to create a Bryony themed cookbook and donate any profits it might make. Its recipient is Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties. In its 40-year history, the organization has matched over 15,000 at risk children from single-parent homes.

Because Bryony's main character, Melissa Marchellis, spends part of her childhood in a single parent home, the group was a good match for the cookbook. I am humbled that Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties agreed.

So, I scrolled through the manuscript, jotted all the food references, and began collecting recipes. I modified many of the Victorian dishes to ease preparation, but kept the original language intact. Some, such as boiled calves head, are included so readers can learn about the culinary delights of days long past.

But enough talking. As Melissa’s younger brother Brian said during a holiday dinner, “We made all this food to eat, right?”

Right, Brian. Happy reading and bon appétit!



  
From "Memories in the Kitchen: Bites and Nibbles From 'Bryony'"

All proceeds benefit Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties. www.bbbswillgrundy.org.


Tuesday, April 28, 2015

Do It Now

That is an oft-repeating sermon theme from our associate pastor.

It's also wise words for writers during those times when snippets of brilliance pops into our brains, btu we neglect to write them down, certain we will remember them.

Too many times, we do not, and they are gone forever.

It only takes a moment to pause and jot down those key words, phrases, ideas.

I walk with paper in my pockets. I sleep with paper by my sleeping bag. My home desk testifies to my voluminous and random note-taking.



I don't use every jot of information. Heck, I can't even READ every jot of information, although I can usually decipher enough to recall the rest.

No paper? I email thoughts to me. When I'm too occupied for even that, I'll ask someone nearby to send me an email, with the reminder in the subject line.

The inspiration for this blog post came from an incident Sunday night when I did not take my own advice. Luckily, through strong mental concentration, unpleasant when sleepiness is stronger, I did remember and sent myself a garbled email.

But one really good conversation between Steve and Brian when I was writing Staked! that I did NOT write down is known only to distant lobes and unidentified brain connections.

Write it down now.

 

Thursday, November 27, 2014

Happy Thanksgiving BryonySeries Fans with an Excerpt from "Staked!"


For a day that celebrated the joys of feasting on animals, a surprising amount of people crowded Living Water Worship Center. A woman wearing a bulky fur coat and heavy make-up scooted closer to the elderly man on her left in a futile attempt to make room for them.
          
“Go ahead,” Brian whispered to Steve. “I’ll take Ellie and Fawn and look for another seat.”
           
 Deanna resisted John-Peter’s nudges to get into the pew first, but since he refused to cozy up to the giant raccoon, he grabbed Deanna’s arm, pushed her into the seat, and quickly slid beside her. Steve squeezed next to him and blocked further movement.
           
“That was a dirty trick,” Deanna mumbled.
          
 John-Peter grinned open-mouthed at her and then said, “Shh. The music is starting.”
           
 An off-key guitar band opened the service. John-Peter gazed about the bare white walls and tried to ignore the grating twangs. Steve closed his eyes, smiled, and tapped his foot. Deanna squirmed restlessly and jabbed her elbow into his ribs.
           
 “Sit still,” John-Peter hissed.
            
“Make me,” she hissed right back.
             
At the song's completion, everyone clapped, and the guitarists immediately began another. Deanna yawned loudly, and John-Peter slid his finger in her mouth. She slapped his hand and whispered angrily, “You messed it up.”
           
 “Cut it out, Deanna.”
             
“You’re not my boss.” She yawned again, this time wider and louder.
           
Finally, the pastor assumed the podium. For the next forty-five minutes, the man recounted every food-related story in the Bible, beginning with The Garden of Eden and continuing through Peter’s vision of the unclean animals. Deanna’s eyes drooped. John-Peter stifled his own yawn and accidentally bit his tongue.
            
“But all the food in the world will never satisfy our hunger for God, who made everything that sustains us.” The pastor raised his hands. “Let us all stand and sing our thanks to God.”
            
The nauseating smell of dead fowl assaulted John-Peter’s stomach the moment Ellie opened the front door. Even the garlic from the mashed potatoes couldn’t mask it. Cindy walked from the kitchen and noticed his discomfort.
            
“Whew, it’s hot in here.” She wiped the back of her hand across her forehead. “Brian, can you open the window by the sink? It’s stuck.”
           
 “Cindy,” Darlene called out. “I can’t tell if that lentil loaf is done.”
            
Brian kissed Cindy on the cheek and started up the stairs.
            
“How was church?” Aunt Cindy asked. 
            
 “Packed. But the girls behaved themselves.”
            
After they had all gathered around the table and Steve had begun the blessing, the front door blew open.
           
 “Sorry I’m late,” a red-faced Kellen said as Cindy rushed from the table to take his coat. “My flight was delayed.”
           
 Brian said, “Ellie, let Uncle Kellen sit by Aunt Melissa.”
           
 “I wondered what happened." Melissa looked up as Kellen assumed the vacated seat and unfolded his napkin.
            
 “Arthur was supposed to call," Kellen said, huffing between words.
           
  “He did call when you were taking a shower,” Darlene passed the platter of turkey to Kellen. “I forgot to mention it.”
            
 John-Peter carefully observed Kellen's pouring of gravy over everything on his plate. Kellen stopped in mid-stream and stared back. “Is there a problem?”
           
 "Your face is bloated and blotchy.”
           
 Kellen puffed the air from his cheeks as he set down the gravy boat. His hands were ruddy and swollen; the veins were engorged “It’s a little warm in here, that’s all.”
           
 Brian opened another window. Kellen picked up his fork. Steve cleared his throat. Melissa nudged Kellen. He raised blood-shot eyes as red as his lapel rose, noticed Steve’s folded hands, and laid the fork against the plate.
            
Steve bowed his head. “Heavenly Father, we give you thanks and praise for bringing us here today to celebrate your bountiful goodness.”
             
John-Peter studied the lentil loaf Aunt Cindy had sliced. A little dry, but not bad for a first attempt.
            
“And we thank you for providing us with family, people we can love and who love us. We ask you to continue blessing us in the coming year so we can once again join together to give thanks. Amen.” Steve reached for the cranberry sauce. “How’s that? The food didn’t even have time to get cold.”
            
The phone rang.
           
 “You sit,” Brian said to Cindy. “I’ll get it.”
            
“There’s pineapple in the sweet potatoes, Grandpa,” Deanna said.
           
“Well, it’s a good thing I like pineapple.”
            
“I helped make them yesterday, before you guys got here.”
           
“Then I’ll have to take an extra helping.”
            
John-Peter gestured his fork at Ellie’s plate. “You haven’t touched your Brussels sprouts.”
            
 “Brussels sprouts are pukey.”
            
Brian reappeared, looking grim. “Melissa, it’s for you.”
           
“We’ll wait to go around the table,” Darlene said.
            
John-Peter had hoped this year they might skip the "I’m thankful for…” ritual his grandmother always insisted they perform. Be thankful for what? His best friend was in love with a marionette; he was related to no one in his deceitful family; and his doctor just told him (DELETED. SPOILER).
          
“More turkey, Kellen?” Brian said.
            
Melissa sat back down, biting her lip to keep from crying.
            
“It’s Carol,” she said, picking up her napkin and placing it on her lap. “They’re not sure what happened. The aid who brought her dinner tray found her unconscious so they called an ambulance.”
            
“Thanks, Brian,” Kellen said, taking three large slices and then checking his watch. “Do you want to fly back with me tonight, Melissa?”
            
She shuddered and rested her head in her hands. “I don’t know what to do.”
            
Darlene interrupted. “I’ll be fine driving alone. I'll have Steve and John-Peter to keep me company.”
            
“Grandpa,” Ellie said. “We have two kinds of pie tonight: pumpkin and apple."
           
 "Make up your mind, Melissa," Kellen said. "I haven't got all night."
            
“Maybe I should go," Melissa said. "I’ll go call the hospital and tell them I’ll be there tonight.”
           
Steve pushed away his plate and patted Ellie’s hand. “Your grandmother won’t let me eat two pieces.”
            
“You probably shouldn’t have one,” Darlene said.

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

What Faults Do Your Characters Have?

Nothing makes a character seem less real than one without any faults or failings, and that includes your heroes.

No person is perfect, and creating perfection in your character, unless for some reason "perfection" is inherent to the story line, will give that character a plastic appearance. The faults can range from the minor flaws we all have (yes, we do) to severe personality or moral defects, depending on the role and relationship of your character to your novel's plot.

Consider the following from Bryony:

*  Melissa Marchellis: occasionally lies when it suits her purposes, sells out her safety to live a fantasy, and is obsessive about the object of her fascination, which leads to impulsive and poor choices.

*  Brian Marchellis: can be enthusiastic to the point of annoying and energetic without focus. Luckily for Brian, a good mentor harnessed those traits.

*  Darlene Marchellis: distracted and trusting enough to be irresponsible where her children are concerned.

*  Steve Barnes: other than occasional crankiness (who could blame him?), Steve is really all right. :)

*  Ann Dalton: unrealistic idealism

*  Katie Miller: immaturity, hero worship

*  Julie Drake: bluntly outspoken

*  Shelly Gallager: passive personality

*  Laura Jones: boy-crazy

*  Kimberly Whitney: narcissistic

*  Frank Marchellis: extremely bashful and introspective

*  John Simons: self-centered and manipulative

*  Henry Matthews: biting sarcasm, mocking, hedonistic

*  Kellen Weschler: insatiable need for power and control