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Tuesday, August 1, 2023

Bertrand's Back-To-School Birthday Bash...With Santa!

So this post has two parts: a short part (a straightforward invitation) and a long part (the "why" behind the invite).

I hope you stick around for the whole read. I hope the post inspires you in some way.

As a reward, I will keep the rest of the week's post very, very short.

The invitation

You are invited celebrate Bertrand the Mouse’s birthday!

Yes, we are hosting a birthday party for a crocheted mouse.




"Bertrand’s Back-To-School Birthday Bash" will be held from noon to 4 p.m. Saturday, Aug. 19 at The Book Market, 2365 Plainfield Road, Crest Hill.

The only gift Bertrand wants is for guests to purchase one (or more) of very his discounted books for Santa to distribute during the holidays.

Santa will distribute free ice cream from 1 to 3 p.m. or while supplies last.

Other books in the BryonySeries also available for purchase.

Can't attend but still want to send a gift? Message us at bryonyseries@gmail.com and we can work something out.

The "why"

Most people haven't heard the story I'm about to tell. But I'm telling it now since it might help Santa help kids.

The idea of donating BryonySeries books and WriteOn Joliet anthologies originated from the pandemic.

I had broken my toe late December 2020 and was still hobbling around in early February when Timothy and I decided place some Bertrand the Mouse and Cornell Dyer books in Little Free libraries all around Joliet.

As we drove and talked and placed, I told him I hp[ed to bless a classroom in Joliet Public Schools District 86 with a free book for every child. Remote learning had been hard on kids, and I wanted to encourage their love of reading with books that were written by someone who had grown up loving books.

The pandemic had also been hard on small businesses, and we wanted to help a small business, too.

So I wound up adopting a fourth grade classroom at Sandburg Elementary School that March (I had a procedure in February and put the donation on hold). Each student received a Cornell Dyer book.


And Timothy designed a BryonySeries $5 gift card so the students could pick out another book of their choice, any book, at The Book Market in Crest Hill. The gift cards were pre-paid with the owner. so even if a child did not redeem the card, the store made money for the effort.


The following month, I received a check in the mail. I had been overcharged for the procedure. Well, since I had already written that money off, I decided to donate more books with it.

So I contacted The Timbers of Shorewood and asked if it would like some anthologies for its residents. Remember, this was April 2021 and social interaction was still limited. 

The Timbers actually DID want anthologies and wanted to know if I could send thirty, one anthology for each member of its book club. I had enough money for send sixty books (two for each resident). I sent thirty of the regular anthologies for that year and thirty of the special "baby cheetah" anthologies. (Yes, I was overcharged that much).

Side note: The Timbers showed their appreciation with quite the reception in September 2022. That event was the inspirational seed for WriteOn Joliet's radio play. So everyone was blessed by that donation.

Fast forward to them 2021 holidays. One of my adult sons received a promotion and blessed a classroom at District 202 in Plainfield in early 2022, one Cornell book for each of the students. 


And he also blessed a kindergarten classroom at Troy 30-C this past spring, one Bertrand's Silly ABC book for each student (the teacher's pick).

In December 2021, WriteOn Joliet also had its new anthology out (we release one every year). So I asked Senior Star at Weber Place in Romeoville (which is not called that anymore) if they would l like any anthologies. They would - please send one hundred and fifty.

Yes, that is correct. We sent one hundred and fifty WriteOn Joliet anthologies, which pretty much tanked my BryonySeries marketing budget for awhile.

The budget recovered enough by February to offer this book as a gift to anyone who requested it as our Calkins Day gift to the recipient, good through the end of February 2022, since Calkins Day was once again on Zoom.

I really didn't think anyone would request a book...and for half a month no one did. But then a few people shared it on a few freebie sites. We shipped sixty. WHEW!

The following May, we as an entire family "adopted" A.O. Marshall Elementary School in Joliet. That means each student received a Bertrand the Mouse book or a Cornell Dyer book, depending on the age, grade, and reading abilities of the children.

Yes, you read that correctly. We gave a book to each child in that school. I have the "thank you" letter from the district for anyone who'd like to see it.

Then last November, I gave almost my entire stock of Bertrand the Mouse books (eighty-four books in all) To Jerry Curl of Santa Services to distribute to children (some of whom have special needs) as well as to adults with special needs.

This spring, we gave him another one hundred and fifty books of this Bertrand the Mouse title.

In May, we had a small donation from a customer at Bicentennial Park. Then we had another small donation from a customer at New Orleans North.

I'm sure you know where this is going.

We turned those donations into a carnival-themed giveaway on July 3 at Bicentennial Park. And when we ran out of donation money, we kept giving away the books. I've never seen so many people at one event so happy to receive a free book.

So how can we afford to give away so many books? 

Well, it's not because sales are through the roof (I wish!) because proceeds from all sales go back into production). 

We're able to giveaway books because I take on some side work from time to time. And it's not the first time we've done that. Here's why.

Years ago, I wrote a story on a young woman in her twenties. She worked a full-time job to support herself. And she worked a part-time job in order to buy food and clothes to give to those in need.

At the time I wrote that story, I was working two jobs and homeschooling four of my six children. I could not emulate her then. And I did not emulate her for many years.

But then our family belonged to a small, dying church that could not afford to run a religious education program and a youth group. The large and small hall needed painting. And so forth.

So we did it. All of it. With our own money, earned from extra work, we bought everything from paint to kitchen and art supplies to remodeling and furnishing three outbuildings (and constructing a fourth) on our property.

We hired a major Christian artist to sing karaoke to the kids on our back porch (We have the video to prove it). And we hired two major Christian artists for a free concert at Bicentennial Park (we rented out the theater). 

So back to the books.

Whenever people asked me for help with their manuscripts, I generally turned them down due to lack of time. Still, I did edit this novel before the pandemic, which is an amazing ready, by the way. And I did help a Joliet woman write her memoir. 

And then in April 2020, I was approached by an acquaintance to edit his travel book, and he refused to take my "no" as an answer. 

I prayed on it, accepted, and have since completed additional carefully curated projects at a highly discounted editing rate (less than minimum wage), which we turn into book donations. This way, we bless writers and readers at the same time.

In fact, Rebekah even made a website for our project just to put all the information in one place. I say "our," because she has the production skills. 

However, as I'm sure you've figured out by now, donating books on this level is not sustainable over a very long time.

But it's a really valuable endeavor. Check out this post regarding the literacy problem in the United States.

Jerry Curl of Santa Services said he and his four other Santas interacted with thousands of children last year. He recently sent me this email:


Good evening, Denise, 

I would like to thank you for your donation of the books over the course of the last year, for both our story time with Santa events as well as our Easter Bunny events. 

The story time with Santa events that we held as fundraisers are always a hit with the children as Santa and Mrs. Claus read to the children from a variety of different books. 

Through sponsorships like yours, we are able to supply small gifts, as well as crafts and refreshments. I look forward to working with you in the future and again thank you for all that you do to help our program. 

Looking forward to our committed date of August 19th ice cream with Santa fundraiser. 

I hope you have a great day and again thank you for all that you do.


Bertrand the Mouse's sole mission is to introduce children to the joys of reading. 

And, no, I will not profit from any of the Bertrand the Mouse books guests buy for Santa on August 19. Here's why.

We sell the Bertrand books for $5 a copy, which is nearly at cost.  The books will go through The Book Market register as a consignment, which is forty percent. So we will actually lose on the event. 

But that's OK.

Because your gift will help Santa make a child smile and maybe, just maybe, encourage a child to pick up another book by another author...and maybe then another. This is a really good value for $5.

You may personalize your gift by writing a note inside the book, if you like

And Santa will make you smile with free ice cream on August 19. Everyone is on his "nice" list that day, whether or not they buy a book. (We are buying the ice cream, too).

Because, trust me, I have already ordered lots of books. They are on their way to my home as I write this. Either way, those books are leaving with Santa on August 19.

Santa will not leave Bertrand's birthday party empty-handed.

And all those Bertrand books will find their way into the hands of children this holiday season.









Friday, January 6, 2023

Story Round-Up: Features in The Herald-News, Dec. 31, 2022 to Jan. 6, 2023

Good morning.

Today I have just eleven features and news stories to share with you today, with more that will be posted over the weekend. So be sure to check back on The Herald-News site: shawlocal.com/the-herald-news.

Tuesday marked my first day back after having COVID. Although the virus was relatively mild for me, it did bring quite a bit of fatigue, which made this week challenging. I'm feeling pretty good today, and I 'm happy about that, since we celebrate our family Christmas tomorrow, and I have lots to do tonight.

Here is a quick recap on BryonySeries projects in the works.

I now rough drafts for the first five chapters of in the final book in the BryonySeries Limbo trilogy: House on Top of the Hill

I am in the process of writing the net book in The Adventures of Cornell Dyer subseries: Cornell Dyer and the Hounds of Basketville. Sue Midlock almost has the art done, too. But I will adjust and get that book written soon.

You can find other titles in the series here. Timothy has not yet added our latest titles to the BryonySeries bookstore. But all titles are also on Amazon

I'm also working on a guide book to the series called: Welcome to Munsonville: the People, Places, and Things of the BryonySeries.

And I'm also working on a novella. But I'm not sharing any details yet. 

Rebekah is also slowly updating the BryonySeries YouTube and Pinterest accounts, so watch for those.

Now back to the stories. Simply click on the link of the story that looks interesting to you. Happy scrolling!

But before the stories, I have a list of additional resources and information. Please check them out, too.

Finally, if you'd like to find more kindness in your life, consider this book.

And have a great Friday!

RECIPE OF THE WEEK

Sue's Diner is a fictional restaurant in the fictional Munsonville that only exists in the BryonySeries.

Each Sunday, we post a new recipe. The recipe is either featured in one of our cookbooks or will be featured in an upcoming cookbook.

Check out the recipe here.

WRITERS

If you're a writer anywhere in the world, you're welcome to join WriteOn Joliet's Facebook pageWe're based in Joliet, Illinois, but we love to meet and interact with writers outside our area, too.

If you'd like to officially join WriteOn Joliet, we have two tiers of dues. We also have a marketing arm that's getting longer every year, well, except this year. Check us out at writeonjoliet.com.

I also suggest this book: Little Book of Revision: A Checklist for Fiction Writers. It's exactly as it says. Each page some with one suggestion for revision. The rest of the page is blank, so you can add your own notes. All proceeds benefit WriteOn Joliet.

If you need support in your writing, I highly recommend this Twitter group: #5amwritersclub. I  joined it last year. Writers support each other on Twitter and meet every three weeks at 5 a.m. (4 a.m. CST - needless to say, I am often late!) on Zoom.

If you need editing or help with self-publishing, check out dmbaranunland.com.

ARTISTS

If you need an artist for a project, I offer these recommendations.

NEWSLETTERS

Sign up for The Munsonville Times by emailing us at bryonyseries@gmail.com. The newsletter still isn't official yet, so we don't have an actual link on the website - but we are working on it! 

SOCIAL MEDIA

Daily updates: I do post the briefs on Twitter during the week, so you're welcome to follow me at @Denise_Unland61.

BryonySeries stuff: I post curated content relating to the BryonySeries on Twitter at @BryonySeries and assorted related content at facebook.com/BryonySeries, youtube.com/user/BryonySeries, and themes of each book in the BryonySeries at pinterest.com/bryonyseries.

And of course, please follow the adventures of Bertrand the Mouse on Instagram at bertrand_bryonyseries.

BRYONYSERIES BOOKS

For books and more information about the series, visit bryonyseries.com.

BRYONYSERIES EVENTS

A full month of virtual events can be found at bryonyseries.com/calendar-of-events.

QUESTIONS

Email me at bryonyseries@gmail.com.

Thank you for reading The Herald-News. And for reading this blog. And if you've read (or plan to read) any of my books. Your support is greatly appreciated.

FEATURES

Neurosurgery program at Silver Cross Hospital in New Lenox to expand in 2023: Dr. Peleg Horowitz: ‘When I speak to these patients, they are very grateful to not have to travel into the city.’

5 generations of women were married at same Lockport church: Abigail Rodewald Brown: ‘I can’t mess with tradition by any means.’

Lincoln-Way West H.S. bowling coach honored for meritorious service: Scott Ullian: ‘To further someone else life means more to me than me shooting a 300 game.’ 

Top 10 most-read stories from The Herald-News in Joliet

Will County officials, residents share their hopes with the Herald-News for 2023

Joliet grassroots event raises $160,000 for 6 Will County agencies: Denise Maffeo: ‘Which I think is really amazing for just a party with costumes.’ 

Hospitals in Will, Grundy counties announce their 1st babies of 2023

2 shot in Joliet house; 18-year-old man arrested

Man rushed to hospital after he was burned in car fire at Shorewood parking lot: The cause of the blaze is under investigation

Pets of the Week: Jan. 2, 2023: Will County rescues have dogs and cats for adoption.

5 Things to do in Will County: plenty of live music to start 2023: Plus, celebrate 2023 in the style of a 1759 French-Canadian fur trader







Illustration by Matt Coundiff for "Visage"



Monday, December 16, 2019

Whirlwind

That's how I'd describe this past weekend.

I left work at nine o'clock on Friday night and came home to a huge mess in my kitchen, which made me very happy.

Timothy had turned it into a test kitchen and prepared prototypes of four recipes I want to highlight in Thursday's Herald-News. And he was experimenting with the different techniques for photographing food, which he wants to use at his own job and for the return of the BryonySeries "Sue's Diner" recipe of the week, which went by the wayside this year during the redesign of the BryonySeries website.

After helping Timothy cleanup, and after working out and showering, it was Saturday, which brought chores, errands, the last edits on a side project, and a trip to Chicago to Del Seoul in Chicago for bipimbap for dinner.

Sunday brought an early services, Panera for breakfast and coffee, some work to complete, a meeting with Phyllis and Rebekah to sift through hundreds of photos to decide placement in the memoir, the traditional feast day dinner with Rebekah at Cracker Barrel, a dance recital for two of my grandchildren, the shooting of photos and videos for work, all of which was followed by a brisk walk, shower, and episode 16 of I Hear Your Voice with Rebekah before I fell asleep.

How can it be Monday already?

But it's a serene morning.

I hear the gentle woosh of cars through the snow outside my window.

My office/bedroom has a miniature Christmas tree (thank you, Joshua and Timothy) and my living room has a larger one (thank you, Rebekah and Daniel).

A fake fireplace softly crackles and glows (thank you, Timothy) and an globe snowflake ornament with a tealight candle (thank you, Sarah) sits by my computer (the one Christopher built for me as a surprise Christmas present a few years ago) with the coffee while the John Gary Christmas album (one of the Christmas records of my youth), very quietly emanates through my speakers, so as not to wake anyone else (thank you, modern technology).

I have not yet looked at my Monday to-do list, although I know it's full, and yet, I also know not one task is unpleasant.

Whether it's a "work" day or a "free" day or a "fiction" day, I like this early part of the morning, th slow wake up while I browse email, news, and social media, sip a nice dark roast coffee, and revel in the quiet while the rest of the house is dark.

Have a most blessed day.








Tuesday, June 7, 2011

How to be Funny in Three Hundred Words

If I find out, I'll let you know.

Last month, my publicist began the Heavenly Sinners Writing Guild and asked me to assist her. At that first meeting, Bryony got its first reading debut (Hurray!), but I left with an assignment: write a humorous event, short, about three hundred words.

I've been stewing on this all month.

As a family, we laugh a lot. My children are funny. My cats are funny. My life is often a joke. I, however, am not funny.

Needless to say, I've written nothing.

Now, I'm not one to annoy my publicist (at least, not on purpose), so I'll have to produce something. With the meeting exactly thirty-six hours away, I'm not hopeful I'll come up with something sidesplitting in that time, especially since the lord of the jester muses has been silent for the last twenty-nine days (or so).

Yesterday, I read a blog from WriteLife LLC about writing comedy (http://writelifellc.wordpress.com/2011/06/06/writing-comedy/), which I carefully studied. The overall message was not to be contrived, to find your own natural humor.

Although that almost brings me back to square one, it's the best advice I have.

Please, wish me luck.

Monday, June 6, 2011

Mentoring Grant Cut: Another Reason to Support the Bryony Cookbook

This is reposted from the Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties Facebook page with permission. This organization is the recipient of the Bryony cookbook.


On May 11, 2011, Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties was one of 152 Big Brothers Big Sisters affiliates nationwide to receive notice that federal grant funding earmarked to serve high-risk children has been cut, effective September 29, 2011.

Big Brothers Big Sisters currently provides consistent, enduring, success-focused mentoring services through two 3-year Mentoring Children of Prisoners (MCP) grants awarded by the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services’ Administration for Children & Families (ACF).

In 2009, the agency received a $300,000 3-year grant to serve children of incarcerated parents in Will and Grundy Counties.

In 2010, the agency was part of an Illinois state-wide association of Big Brothers Big Sisters agencies that received a $4.5 million 3-year grant, and they use that funding to serve children of incarcerated parents in and Kankakee and Iroquois Counties.

“We received notice that no funding was appropriated in the FY 2011 budget to continue either of these grants,” said Big Brothers Big Sisters CEO Lisa Morel Las.

In April 2011, Congress passed and the President signed into law H.R.1473 that provides full year funding for the Federal Government for FY 2011. H.R. 1473 does not include a provision for the Mentoring Children of Prisoners (MCP) program and therefore, there was no funding appropriated to continue the MCP program.

The abrupt cancellation of the MCP program will require 152 agencies across the nation to transition or terminate services for 18,000 vulnerable children. Locally, Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties serves approximately 500 children in Will, Grundy, Kankakee and Iroquois, and approximately 100 of these matches are supported by MCP grant funding.

“While we will do all we can to transition services for the children served locally under this grant – up to 100 children could have their matches prematurely terminated,” explained Las.

“Recognizing that the premature termination of a match can cause additional harm to already vulnerable children; the Board of Directors and I are working on focusing resources and utilizing the remaining funds effectively. Last week, we were forced to layoff two employees and are identifying and searching for alternate public or private funding to prevent premature termination of matches and more layoffs in September.”

Las notes, “We recognize that the federal deficit must be addressed for the sake of current and future generations, but feel strongly that good programs should be separated from those that don’t work. Research shows that positive outcomes increase with the use of evidence-based practices – which is what Big Brothers Big Sisters uses.”

Studies find when served by Big Brothers Big Sisters, these kids and others who face serious adversity have a greater chance than their peers for having positive relationship interactions and breaking cycles of crime, poverty and school under performance too often linked to youths in their circumstances.

“Investing in quality mentoring for at-risk children has a demonstrable return on investment. The short-term savings that will be realized with the cancellation of the MCP grants will have a lasting and negative impact on our nation and our youth,” says Las. “We will have to spend substantially more later in the child’s life - when these same young people who could have continued to be mentored in our program – become both the perpetrators and victims of crime.”

Friday, May 13, 2011

My Favorite Poem about Mothers

Yes, I know it's a little late for Mother's Day, but it's Victorian era, so still appropriate.


Rock Me to Sleep

By Elizabeth Akers Allen 1832–1911



Backward, turn backward, O Time, in your flight,

Make me a child again just for tonight!

Mother, come back from the echoless shore,

Take me again to your heart as of yore;

Kiss from my forehead the furrows of care,

Smooth the few silver threads out of my hair;

Over my slumbers your loving watch keep;—

Rock me to sleep, mother, – rock me to sleep!



Backward, flow backward, O tide of the years!

I am so weary of toil and of tears,—

Toil without recompense, tears all in vain,—

Take them, and give me my childhood again!

I have grown weary of dust and decay,—

Weary of flinging my soul-wealth away;

Weary of sowing for others to reap;—

Rock me to sleep, mother – rock me to sleep!



Tired of the hollow, the base, the untrue,

Mother, O mother, my heart calls for you!

Many a summer the grass has grown green,

Blossomed and faded, our faces between:

Yet, with strong yearning and passionate pain,

Long I tonight for your presence again.

Come from the silence so long and so deep;—

Rock me to sleep, mother, – rock me to sleep!



Over my heart, in the days that are flown,

No love like mother-love ever has shone;

No other worship abides and endures,—

Faithful, unselfish, and patient like yours:

None like a mother can charm away pain

From the sick soul and the world-weary brain.

Slumber’s soft calms o’er my heavy lids creep;—

Rock me to sleep, mother, – rock me to sleep!



Come, let your brown hair, just lighted with gold,

Fall on your shoulders again as of old;

Let it drop over my forehead tonight,

Shading my faint eyes away from the light;

For with its sunny-edged shadows once more

Haply will throng the sweet visions of yore;

Lovingly, softly, its bright billows sweep;—

Rock me to sleep, mother, – rock me to sleep!



Mother, dear mother, the years have been long

Since I last listened your lullaby song:

Sing, then, and unto my soul it shall seem

Womanhood’s years have been only a dream.

Clasped to your heart in a loving embrace,

With your light lashes just sweeping my face,

Never hereafter to wake or to weep;—

Rock me to sleep, mother, – rock me to sleep!





Friday, April 29, 2011

Old Sly Eye by Russell Gordon Carter

We'd settled down last night to read this story, Daniel, fifteen, and I, amidst Daniel's fake yawns, his way of telling me he was about to be bored, despite my gushing, "Oh, I remember this one! It's good!!!"

Halfway through the story of a seventeenth century American boy trapped inside his home with a deadly panther, Daniel had taken over all the parts and was speeding through the story.

Its author, Russell Gordon Carter (1892-1957) wrote hundreds of short stories for children. They appeared in such publications as Boy's Life and Saturday Evening Post. In later life, when he branched into adult literature, he tended to write stories with an Irish theme.

Read Old Sly Eye and other stories by Carter for free online.

Monday, April 25, 2011

Making the Bryony Videos, Step One: Stephen Tuplin

Book trailers, in general, turn me off. They're too static and dry. I wanted something more visually exciting for Bryony.

Enter Stephen Tuplin.

Stephen is all about movies. Growing up, he'd invite a dozen kids to his house for the sole purpose of watching a movie together. The events were so well put together, and my son Timothy enjoyed them so much, that we offered similiar affairs at our house all the years we ran The Higher Ark youth group.

No one was surprised when Stephen was accepted into Tribeca Flashpoint Academy in Chicago as a film student. We had seem some of his childhood endeavors (His squirrel movie was a cult favorite at our house), so we all knew he had talent, and I enjoyed watching his progress from the clips he posted on Facebook.

I explained the project to Stephen, then sent him the manuscript and the illustrations. Soon afterward, he explained his vision for the trailer, along with a mention that he had an actress interested in portraying Bryony's main character Melissa Marchellis and some location ideas. Really, all he needed to do was film it.

That, I thought, was that.

Then, in December, when Bryony's web administrator, Sarah Stegall,  was in town, we had a Bryony "Meet and Greet" so everyone on the team (thus far) could shake hands round and put names to faces. At the meeting's close, Stephen leaned over and said, "Your website needs more content. I'd also like to make a music video and shoot interviews with members of the team."

The music video would feature James Onohan, the pianist and composer, playing the Bryony theme song he had created for our upcoming Bryony CD, The Best-Loved Compositions of John Simons. That CD will also feature Onohan's original music.

I agreed to Stephen's suggestion, with an idea of my own. "Let's dress up James in period clothing and shoot him at a concert grand piano in a Victorian mansion," I said.

Stephen loved the idea. Of course, now we needed to find appropriate costumes, a concert grand, and an old mansion, or at least, fabricate a reasonable facsimile.

After much thinking and prayer, I'd found the answer.

Friday, April 8, 2011

The Night the Bed Fell by James Thurber

American cartoonist and intellectual humorist James Thurber was born in 1894, which loosely gives him a Victorian connection. Other than that, The Night the Bed Fell is a real-life-based story that anyone who lives in a house full of characters will immediately understand.

The story opens with the father of the family announcing he is sleeping in an old bed in the attic so he can think. The mother protests, convinced the bed will collapse and kill him. The family includes a number of eccentric personalities, including a cousin who fears he will stop breathing in his sleep and two aunts who just know they are being robbed each night (One piles her belongings outside her door, and the other gathers her shoes at her bedside and flings at the first sound).

A glimpse inside my house will reveal my husband who is kind and curmudgeonly by turns, me who rarely comes out of the attic, and a series of adult or nearly adult children who are nearly identical in appearance, but quite different and often clashing in personalities.

Included in this mix are six cats: Frances, a loner; Midnight, petite, skittish, and sweet; Faith, who has a nervous, teeth-grinding tic; Hope, an instigator; Charity, who has two fetishes: playing in water and chewing slender electrical cords; and Alex, who tags at your heels and cries to be picked up.

Our bed has never fallen, but in the next room, Faith just ran over Timothy (who WAS sleeping) and then jumped up onto a shelf and knocked a box on him. He flew out of bed, threatening evil things to her, should he catch her.

He won't, of course, but I wouldn't put it past her to flick water from her bowl on him the second he falls asleep.

The Night the Bed Fell is available for free reading online.

Sunday, April 3, 2011

Sarah Stegall and the Magic of Bryony

My cell phone rings, and there's a chorus of groans.

"Betcha it's Sarah," one disgruntled adult child says. It doesn't matter which adult child. They've ALL said it. Nary a day passes when Sarah and I don't speak at least once, and one time is on the low side.

That wasn't the case a year ago.

Sarah is my oldest daughter. She lives out of state, but she could have lived on Pluto for all we communicated, mostly by email, even if she had lived next door. Things had been tense at best since her teen years, although we had progressed to some polite, if not friendly, communication.

Then, after the first round of editing, my niece asked to read Bryony. Except for four members of my household, no one else had read it or expressed a remote interest in reading it.

That got the proverbial ball rolling.

My niece loved it and begged her mother, my sister, to read it. My sister told me yesterday she had resisted, certain the story wouldn't be very good. But she read it, to please her daughter and loved it, so much that my parents wanted a copy. They, too, loved it, and my mother said so to Sarah.

That's when my daughter called and wanted to know why I hadn't let her read it. I told her she might, if she liked.

Sarah later told me she only wanted to read it so she could publically and harshly denigrate it. Hoiwever, I already knew that, which is why I couldn't box up a copy and send it out to her fast enough. Bryony was about to face her greatest critic.

A couple days later I received a Facebook message from Sarah: "Where are the other two drafts?" That was all, but she was in, "sucked in," she likes to say. Well, it is a vampire story. It was also a peaceful truce to years of conflict.

Since then, Sarah has created and maintained Bryony's Facebook page and website, helped with the cookbook, and has been the book's biggest champion and promotor. No one, including the author, has more enthusiasm for the story. Sarah has read Bryony cover to cover more than anybody and intends to keep that record, even after the book's release.

I like to think her reaction is a testimony to a good story. Sarah says she'd hate to see Bryony take off and miss her chance at being rich and famous. Hmmm....


Friday, April 1, 2011

The Turn of the Screw by Henry James

In the seventh grade, I was fascinated with the Dan Curtis made for TV movie based on this story, and I couldn't wait to check out James' version from the library.

Not only is the full text available online, many scholars have disssected and analyzed this story for possible subliminal themes and the meaning of the ending, which is obscure.

The story centers around the manuscript of a deceased governess. She details her experiences of caring for two children in a house where the previous governess has died.

James purposely is unclear  about whether the ghosts of the first governess and her dead lover (another former staff member) are haunting the children of if the governess herself is obsessed and projects that obsession onto the children.

The story still intrigues me almost four decades after I first read it.

Sunday, March 27, 2011

"Every man shall give as he is able." Deuteronomy 16:17

*On Friday night, Bryony did just that. In the entire scheme of Bowl for Kids' Sake, the annual fundraiser of Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties (http://www.bbbswillgrundy.org/), ten bowlers' efforts for the two Bryony teams--Just Steve and Stake and Blade--seem small and insignificant, but it will make the difference for one child. *We made our fundraising goal of $1,000, the amount it takes to match one child from a single parent home with one positive adult mentor. *To be sure, we sweated it, and we reached the eleventh hour not certain if we would make it. Everyone we know (including us) is broke, so soliciting those donations was hard work. *Still, most people were happy to help, even if all they could offer was a dollar. My fifteen year old son obtained a solicitor's permit and went door to door. We even had a donation post online at midnight, just as the bowling ended. The next day, we received a cash donation. *Besides, we had a blast. My mother bought my daughter, Sarah Stegall, Bryony's web administrator, a plane ticket from North Carolina to Illinois. Sarah like a rock star by flying into town for twenty-four hours for a fundraiser and a taped Bryony interview at the P. Seth Magosky Museum of Victorian Life (http://www.museumofvictorianlife.org/). *Anyway, Sarah deserved to feel like a rock star. She designed and maintains the BryonySeries Facebook page, has been instrumental in solicting recipes for the Bryony cookbook, set up the BryonySeries blog, and is the entire creative force behind the BryonySeries website. Moreoever, she raised several hundred for the cause (all this while caring for a four-year old at home). *During the bowling, my twenty-year-old son performed a ridiculous turkey dance, which Sarah videotaped on her phone and plans to upload soon. *My seventeen year old daughter Rebekah bowled with a case of hives and fell asleep between turns due to the antihistamine and a very long day at work. *It was the first time I had seen my adult godddaughter since she lost over a hundred pounds. She's had a makeover, works out, and looks so great, I stood in admiration of her all evening. *We even will have a souvenior of Bryony's first bowling fundraiser. My adult son Christopher bid on and won a blank bowling pin, which a local artist has agreed to decorate in whatever theme the winner requested. *Naturally, Christopher told her he wanted the Bryony logo. He also took a bet that other team members would have some money in their pockets, because he bid more than he had in his wallet. *The high point for the author, fundraising goals aside, was spending a lighthearted evening with all six of her children. With one living out of town and conflicting work and school schedules amongst the rest of them, this hasn't happened in year. *And yes, we got an updated sibling shot. Look for Sarah to post soon at www.facebook.com/BryonySeries.

Sunday, March 13, 2011

Whom Do You Admire?

A write acquaintance of mine, Serena Diosa, posed this question on her Facebook page for Tinkey’s Goldfish, a children’s book she wrote and self-published. In the several weeks since reading this post, I’ve pondered and considered about how to address it. I can list the people I love, respect, etc., but admire? This morning, it came to me: St. Therese of Avila. St. Therese was a sixteen century Roman Catholic mystic that suffered from ill health and experienced visions (some say she even levitated during Mass). She wrote her Interior Castle under obedience from her superiors and tells her story in a rambling, chatty prose that made me feel I was having a conversation with her. With Interior Castle, St. Therese suggests the soul is divided into seven rooms or “castles,” each having a particular character of its own. She describes each state so clearly, I could easily discern where I was on my spiritual journey using only her roadmap for my guide. I remember the first time I read Interior Castle. I was battling strep and waking frequently from the throat pain; my six month old nursing baby (now a strapping twenty-year-old culinary arts sutdent) woke up in-between those times. Upon each awakening, I would turn on the little light by the bed and read until I grew sleepy again. St. Therese’s writings were so compelling, I forgot about my sore throat and actually began to look forward to the disrupted sleep, so I could read some more. So why do I admire her? I'm attracted to her approach regarding life and mysticism; I appreciate her writing style. She also accomplished something most writers will never achieve (although many secretly hope they will): a manuscript people still seek out and voraciously read, centuries past her death.

Thursday, March 10, 2011

Julie Drake vs. Julie Drake, Part 3

15) When did you marry David? “Real” Julie Drake: “April 18th 1998.” Bryony’s Julie Drake: “After we completed graduate school and set up our practices.” 16) Do you have children? “Real” Julie Drake: “I have two boys.” Bryony’s Julie Drake: “Are you nuts? I’m far too busy, and besides, after watching my friends’ parenting experiences. I’d rather skip the whole business, thank you very much. Life is too short to for all that drama.” 17) Where do you live? “Real” Julie Drake: “In a middle-class neighborhood in Illinois. I’m not poor, but I don’t live in a mansion.” Bryony’s Julie Drake: “In an upscale neighborhood in Washington State.” 18) Do you like traveling? “Real” Julie Drake: “We just bought a 34-foot travel trailer to go on camping trips. I’m not a millionaire, but it’s important to me to that my kids plays sports and have vacations. I want my kids to have wonderful memories growing up. We have gone to Alabama to the beach, Disney, camping trips, Macinac Island, Gaylord Mi., Door County (once). Bryony’s Julie Drake: “I absolutely love it. The world is so big, and there is so much to see. Why confine yourself to just one corner of it?” 19) What is your current job? “Real” Julie Drake: “I’m a purchasing agent for a second generation, family owned company. I’ve worked there for more than twenty-five years and everyone is within a few years of my age, more or less.” Bryony’s Julie Drake: “David and I are psychologists, in private practice.” 20) Are you open to paranormal experiences? “Real” Julie Drake: “Absolutely. I do believe there are people out there who are given psychic gifts. I’ve experienced it. I’ve witnessed it, and I’ve seen it. I’m not one to remember my dreams unless they have a message for me.” Bryony’s Julie Drake: “Very open. You never know what’s out there. Not everything can be experienced with just our five, basic senses.”

Sunday, February 27, 2011

Tinkey's Goldfish

Tinkey’s Goldfish is the title of the first book in a series of positive children’s reading material a writer acquaintance of mine, Serena Diosa, is hoping to create (She self-published the first book in 2009).

Writing objectives aside, Diosa’s ultimate goal is to offer a website full of quality children’s reading material from a variety of authors, perhaps even posting short stories children can read for free.

I find her aspiration and her steps toward it intriguing because, as a homeschool mother of six, a former Sunday School director and youth leader, I gravitate toward projects that support and affirm young people.

So, I “fanned” the Tinkey’s Goldfish Facebook page at http://www.facebook.com/pages/The-beginning-of-Tinkeys-Goldfish-childrens-book-series/259815391263?v=wall to keep up with Diosa’s progress.

That’s when I learned Serena just doesn’t merely encourage reading, but writing, too, by offering suggestions to start the words flowing.

Some of her ideas were though-provoking for me, too, so I clicked onto “New Document:” and began writing. I’ll share the results with you over the next few Sundays. Maybe, it will get someone else thinking (and typing), too.

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Bryony and Bowl for Kids Sake

It's official! Bryony is now one of the sponsors of this year's Bowl for Kids' Sake for Big Brothers Big Sisters of Will and Grundy Counties (http://www.bbss.org/).

My family has formed two teams that will be bowling at the March 25 Candlelight Bowl: Just Steve and Stake and Blade. If you would like to bowl with us that night or form your own Bryony team, message us at bryonyseries@gmail.com.

Although team members have set modest goals, we are trying to raise as much money as possible. If you would like to sponsor me, click here: https://www.kintera.org/faf/donorReg/donorPledge.asp?ievent=451843&supId=321208760

Why should you get involved? According to BBBS, at-risk youth from single parent homes that have experienced their professionally supported, one-on-one mentoring have

* Higher graduation rates
* More positive relationships
* Increased levels of self-confidence

They are also

* 1/3 ess likely to become violent
* 46 percent less likely to use drugs
* 52 percent less likely to skip school

BBBS serves nearly 500 children annually in Will and Grundy Counties. Each $1,000 raised will allow one child to be safey and successfully matched to an adult volunteer for one year. This year's goal is to raise $100,000. Sponsorships fund event costs, so all of the money raised for Bowl for Kids' Sake goes directly to the children.

Why is Bryony getting involved? In my novel, the main character, Melissa, and her brother Brian, live, for a short time, in a single parent home, and are fortunate to have an adult mentor. This is our way of honoring and supporting the efforts of adults who consciously commit to influence children in positive, life-changing ways.

Monday, January 31, 2011

Where Were You When you Wrote...?

Last week, on the twenty-fifth annivesary of The Challenger, I read and responded to several Facebook posts of, "What were doing when the space shuttle exploded?"

Certain memories for us are so vivid we can recall their ancillary details. With The Challenger, I remember hustling three kids under four through the grocery store (Eagle, in Crest Hill), so I could watch the take-off. I remember gaping in horror at what I was really watching and holding Joshua, who was four months old at the time and still dressed in a tan snowsuit my mother had bought him.

I have writing memories like that, too.

When you've pecked at your first novel as long I have, you'd think the particulars would be long buried under more important life moments, but some of them, for whatever reason, are as clear as they day I experienced them. For instance:

* One evening, near dusk, my oldest kids and their friends were modifying the backyard playhouse, so I threw some toys on the floor for my crawler (Timothy, now 20), shut the bedroom door, and wrote a scene where Melissa is alone at home (everyone else had gone to the movies) and searching near Simons Mansion for Snowbell (that scene never made it to the first draft).

* I was taking my daily power walk in Marcrest subdivision in Joliet (where we used to live) when I created a piece of dialogue for Henry that would be my unspoken tag line for many years. I also mentally wrote one of the scenes still featured in Bryony, although I later changed the location in the house. BTW, for anyone familiar with Marycrest, I was walking on St. Joseph, past Marmion and Madonna and around the bend to St. Francis. The sun was shining, too, and it was about 11:00 in the morning.

* The afternoon John Simons' hair lightened and came down, I was driving north on Infantry Lane in Joliet, past a paper carrier acquaintance's house, on my way to pick up a kid nicknamed "Doc." I was listening to Adia by Sarah McLachlan when the image popped into my head. I couldn't wait for a red light to mentally describe my vision of John playing a grand piano inside Simons Mansion, except it wasn't in the music room, but near the grand staircase. At the time, I was a new single parent and my teens had talked me into managing a crew of kids selling newspaper subscriptions. By then, I was writing for the paper and delivering it, too. Hardly the most opportune time in my life to work on a novel, but I always kept paper and pen in my van and jotted notes for Bryony whever I had a chance.

* I was pacing the floor with colicky newborn (Timothy, again) when I created the very ill Frank Marchellis. Three years later, I was pacing the floor with a colickly newborn (Rebekah) when I created two characters for Staked!, the third novel in the BryonySeries, although at the time, it was only one, yet unamed, book.

* The inspiration for a confrontation between Melissa and Henry--actually the character of Henry himself--a favorite with those who have read a Bryony draft (including two of my editors) came from a dream I had regarding an argument with a Henry-like character.

Does anyone else have memories like that?

Friday, December 31, 2010

The Legend of Kate Shelley

Earlier this week, Rebekah and I read The Legend of Kate Shelley by Freeman H. Hubbard and were much inspired by it.

In 1881, this courageous fifteen year old Irish, Victorian girl, and the head of a household of a widowed, invalid mother and five children, alone braved a severe rainstorm with a lifesaving mission.

Kate and her mother had heard the sickening crash of flooded Honey Creek Bridge when it collapsed under the weight of a helper train that crossed it. Despite her mother’s heartfelt pleas to stay home, Kate took a lantern and walked to the C&NW depot to warn the employees there about the situation. For part of the way, Kate crawled across a railroad bridge. She thus saved the lives of the entire occupants of the C&NW train, just as they were about to cross the bridge. Shelley also found the helper train’s engineer and brakeman and led their rescue.

Although I could not find the Hubbard version online, here is a concise retelling of the Kate Shelley legend. http://iagenweb.org/boone/history/kateshelley.htm

Wednesday, December 29, 2010

The Other Stuff I Write

Although I rise at midnight and pen amusing vampire stories, I actually spend very little time writing fiction, compared to the rest of my work.

In addition to delivering newspapers at night, homeschooling two children, hosting a small mission church in my home, and overseeing an "in theory" daily family Bible study with three of my children, I fill my days with a bevy of writing assignments.

Most of my work is for the Herald News (http://heraldnews.suntimes.com/) where I have written on just about every topic imaginable, except for hard news and sports. For many years, I had three "regular features" I filled every week, two of which are still going strong.

One of them, long since phased out for space, was Local Flavor, a spotlight on what area people liked to cook, along with a couple of their recipes. Artworks, which I have been writing since 1998, profiles local artists and their work. An Extraordinary Life spotlights recently deceased individuals who have led unusually interesting and inspirational lives. I've been writing this column for almost ten years.

For the last two years, I have also written press releases and web content for Adventist Midwest Health (http://www.keepingyouwell.com/). The work has no byline, but the topics are versatile and very interesting. That, to me, is more important than a byline.

In addition, I have had two stories published in Chicago Parent (http://www.chicagoparent.com/), one in Frankfort Patch (http://frankfort.patch.com/), and one in The Handmaiden (http://www.conciliarpress.com/.

My other "funsie" writing was several years ago when I wrote three feature stories and one Local Flavor spoof for The Clarion & Globe, the newsletter of the Goodies Rule-OK! fan club (http://www.goodiesruleok.com/).

Come to think of it, I haven't wandered over to the GROK website in a while. I think I'll do that now.

Monday, December 13, 2010

Waiting

An artist friend once showed me a piece he called, “Waiting.” It was a series of overlapping, elongated images that stretched from one end of the canvas to the other.

The painting fascinated me, and I couldn’t stop looking at it. “Oh, that’s just how it feels,” I had said.

With six kids, you’d think I’d be used to waiting. It takes nine months for a baby to be born, a couple years (give or take) to wean, potty train, etc. I’m still waiting for some of them to clean their rooms (I’m not naming names).

Publishing a book, if you’re going to do it right, is an awful lot of waiting.

Yes, I know some vanity presses guarantee a published book in eight weeks or less, but I think skipping a comprehensive editing cheapens any story. In Bryony’s case, significant molding and shaping of a six hundred page manuscript doesn’t happen overnight.

Each round of editing has taken approximately sixteen weeks: eight weeks on my editor’s end and eight weeks on mine. In between, we wait. We are busy with other projects, but nevertheless, we wait.

And wait.

And wait.

And wait.

One day the wait will end, and I’ll be holding the official, published book. Further changes will not be possible. Haste makes waste, they say. It also makes a ruined story.

So, Im okay with waiting. Sort of.