Showing posts with label ramping up tension. Show all posts
Showing posts with label ramping up tension. Show all posts

Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Ramp Up Tension

Has the interest thread on your novel slackened? Does your novel suffer from "middle age syndrome" by sagging in the middle? Here's a few tips for tightening it.

1) Beat the Clock: Add a challenge with an expiration date.

2) Betrayal: a friend becomes a foe.

3) Danger: Introduce elements that put characters at risk of harm.

3) Flashbacks: Memories that add snippets of knowledge crucial to a better understanding of the character and his past that will also impact his present and/or future.

4) Foreshadowing: Throw out shadows of approaching trouble.

5) Frustrate the Goal: Keep it out of your character's reach.

6) Raise the Bar/Stakes/Personal Involvement: The more bigger the goal, the harder your character will try to attain it, and the more readers will root for him.

7) Revelation: New information or comprehension that changes a character's or plot's course.

8) Rivalry: Have two characters bid for the same prize.

9) Threaten a Loved One: And make your character fight to save him.

10) Subtext: Implication adds mystery and draws the reader in.

11) The Unknown: Keep your character (and your readers) guessing.

12) Villains: Add one or more to challenge your character and give him something to fight against, even if the villain is simply the "man in the mirror."