Sunday, July 15, 2018

At-Home Writing Retreat: Day Six, Recap, Some Numbers

Yes, I'm officially sick, not horribly, but enough to be blech. 

In light of my sluggish mind and body, I altered my last day of my at-home writing retreat.

I worked less on book five and finished editing books three and four. 

I'm hoping, over the next six weekends (which should be interesting because I have some "life" things going on), I can finish the remaining arcs and flesh out the details so I can hand off books one through four to my editor around Labor Day and finish editing book five by the time she is ready to read it.

The goal is to release the first book in January 2019.

Also, as a little birthday present, Rebekah finished formatting Cornell Dyer and the Necklace of Forgetfulness today. So I'll scroll through that today, too. Maybe swap out the recipe in Sue's Diner.

For anyone who is interested in word counts, I presented them here in total for all five books (so far), each book by chapter and total word count (one through four is fairly stable) and book five (so far).

Plus the prologue and the epilogue.

For anyone who's read the entire BryonySeries trilogy and want to know how that compares in length, the total  of those books are at the bottom.

For anyone who wants to compare the length to other books they might have read), here's a couple links to check out:



Basically, Before the Blood, the prequel to the BryonySeries is five full-length (but incomplete) novels, with the last two being about the length of Bryony. Together as a whole, these five books tell an incomplete story.

What does that mean?

It means each book, on purpose, when finished, will not be finished.

Each book's cliffhanger prepares the way for the next novel (if read in order; they do not need to be read in order), but each book's cliffhanger does not flow into the next novel.

Again, all five books together tell one incomplete story. The trilogy (Bryony, Visage, and Staked!) finishes the story.

And yet

Each incomplete novel is a developed novel in its own right, complete with plot, unique cast of characters (although a few characters do cross multiple books).

How long have I worked on this? 

I began outlining the prequel in 2010 and pecked out the structure and research into January of 2014 when I began writing i earnest. Each novel has taken me approximately a year to write (some a little more, some a little less).

This is the most complicated story I have ever written. I no longer remember why I chose to write it this way.

But I am very thankful for the freedom to try an experimental way of telling a story, whether or not anyone agrees with the style or enjoys reading it.

Was it worth it?

Yes!

With the finish line in sight, I can honestly say I've learned a tremendous amount about about writing, structure, plot development and character development, dialogue, self-editing, revision, and, mostly, discipline: making myself write when I didn't feel like writing or when ideas did not come. I feel the things I've learned will help me in my job and future projects. This alone makes the entire effort worth it to me.

By Wednesday morning of this past week, with writing on average of 15 hours a day, I hated everything about writing, including this story. I was pretty sick of coffee, too.

Anyway, for the curious, here it is.

And for those who think this is a lot, it's not, really. The Harry Potter series is over a millions words in seven books, whereas my eight would need another 250,000 words to approach it.

So, you see, nothing so remarkable. And I'm certainly no JK.


BEFORE THE BLOOD

TOTAL: 368,441 (so far)

PROLOGUE:  481

JOHN SIMONS:  54, 739  (55,220)

CHAPTER 1: ONE MAGICAL CHRISTMAS: 2,680

CHAPTER 2: TASTING IMMORTALITY: 4.456

CHAPTER 3: KEYS TO HEAVEN: 8,468

CHAPTER 4: MAID TO ORDER: 4,284

CHAPTER 5: POST-GRADUATE STUDIES: 10, 551

CHAPTER 6: SHEDDING THE COCOON: 5, 663
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CHAPTER 7: MUSIC HALLS AND GARBAGE CANS: 6, 644

CHAPTER 8: ONE FOR THE MEMORY BOOKS: 4, 648

CHAPTER 9: THE CONTRACT: 2,197

CHAPTER 10: CROSSING THE RUBICON: 5, 148

KELLEN WECHSLER:  55.473

CHAPTER 1: ASHES: 2,007

CHAPTER 2: FORBIDDEN FRUIT: 2,095

CHAPTER 3: THE VISION: 1,736

CHAPTER 4: BEATEN DOWN: 4, 127

CHAPTER 5: BLACK DEATH: 3, 797

CHAPTER 6: ANGEL OR DEMON? 11.985

CHAPTER 7: STARTING FRESH: 11, 106

CHAPTER 8: JUST SIGN ON THE DOTTED LINE: 6, 517

CHAPTER 9: THE SUITE LIFE: 9,707

CHAPTER 10: THE VACATION: 2, 396

BRYONY MARSEILLES: 78.098

CHAPTER 1: WORM IN THE APPLE: 2, 786

CHAPTER 2: THE WAGES OF SIN IS DEATH: 9,482

CHAPTER 3: BREATH OF LIFE: 1,824

CHAPTER 4: BABY STEPS: 3,249

CHAPTER 5: A MOST PERFECT PLACE TO LIVE: 26, 598

CHAPTER 6: THE MIRACULOUS MEDICAL BAG: 2,776

CHAPTER 7: DOUBLE VISION: 5,748

CHAPTER 8: THE DARK SIDE OF PROGRESS: 21,353

CHAPTER 9: THE DREADED CURSE BEGINS: 3,206

CHAPTER 10: FREEZING TIME: 1,076

HENRY MATTHEWS:  89,770

CHAPTER 1: EATING CAKE: 744

CHAPTER 2: THE GYPSY: 3,700

CHAPTER 3: DEADLY NIGHTSHADE: 5,642

CHAPTER 4: REST FROM THEIR LABORS: 4,058

CHAPTER 5: MIGHTIER THAN THE SWORD: 2,034

CHAPTER 6: HAUTE COUTURE: 26,759

CHAPTER 7: SHOT IN THE HEART: 28, 127

CHAPTER 8: ANTIQUE LACE, PURPLE ROSES, AND VALENTINE HEARTS: 10, 127

CHAPTER 9: SEWING OATS: 7,035

CHAPTER 10: MEETING AT THE CROSSROADS: 1,724

BRYONY SIMONS:  89,419

CHAPTER 11: THE STRANGER:  4,236

CHAPTER1 2: ICE CREAM SOCIAL: 7,572

CHAPTER 13: PSST! BRYONY HAS A BEAU: 3,323

CHAPTER 14: THE DAM BREAKS: 2,284

CHAPTER 15: THE HOUSE IN THE WOODS: 5,742

CHAPTER 16: UNTIL DEATH: 8,774

CHAPTER 17: WHERE HEARTFELT DREAMS COME TRUE: 18,523

CHAPTER 18: THE SERPENT: 5,691

CHAPTER 19: SHATTERED GLASS: 2,479

CHAPTER 20: SHADES AND SHADOWS: 4,385

CHAPTER 21. THE SENTINEL: 8,096

CHAPTER 22: ON THE OTHER SIDE OF SLEEP: 3,321

CHAPTER 23: BRAVING THE WILDERNESS: 2,187

CHAPTER 24: DOWN THE STEEP STAIRCASE OF DESPAIR (STORM CLOUDS): 4,385

CHAPTER 25: STORM CLOUDS (DOWN THE STEEP STAIRCASE OF DESPAIR_: 1,816

CHAPTER 26: ENCHANTED TWILIGHT: 1,386

CHAPTER 27: BRIGHTER DAYS AHEAD: 1,680

CHAPTER 28: SHACKLED: 878

CHAPTER 29: DR. GOTHART LEADS THE WAY OUT: 1,366

CHAPTER 30: BLOOD BATH: 1,297

EPILOGUE: 461

By comparison:

Bryony: just under 100,000
Visage: 130,589
Staked: 149,167









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