Monday, September 7, 2020

"Song of the Shirt"


This poem from the nineteenth century is dedicated to characters in Before The Blood: Henry Matthews' mother and sisters, their friend Bess Masters, and Mrs. Cady and Mr. Langley, who gave them work, as well as to all those who feel as if their labors are vain and unappreciated.



A Poem for Labor Day

"Song of the Shirt"
By Thomas Hood

First published in 1843 

With fingers weary and worn,
   With eyelids heavy and red,
A woman sat in unwomanly rags,
   Plying her needle and thread—
      Stitch! stitch! stitch!
In poverty, hunger, and dirt,
   And still with a voice of dolorous pitch
She sang the "Song of the Shirt."

   "Work! work! work!
While the cock is crowing aloof!           
   And work—work—work,
Till the stars shine through the roof!
It's O! to be a slave
   Along with the barbarous Turk,
Where woman has never a soul to save,
   If this is Christian work!

   "Work—work—work,
Till the brain begins to swim;
   Work—work—work,
Till the eyes are heavy and dim!
Seam, and gusset, and band,                  
   Band, and gusset, and seam,
Till over the buttons I fall asleep,
   And sew them on in a dream!

   "O, men, with sisters dear!
   O, men, with mothers and wives!
It is not linen you're wearing out,
   But human creatures' lives!
      Stitch—stitch—stitch,
   In poverty, hunger and dirt,    
Sewing at once, with a double thread,
   A Shroud as well as a Shirt.

   "But why do I talk of death?
   That phantom of grisly bone,
I hardly fear his terrible shape,
   It seems so like my own—
It seems so like my own,
   Because of the fasts I keep;
Oh, God! that bread should be so dear.
   And flesh and blood so cheap!
            
   "Work—work—work!
   My labour never flags;
And what are its wages? A bed of straw,
   A crust of bread—and rags.
That shattered roof—this naked floor—
   A table—a broken chair—
And a wall so blank, my shadow I thank
   For sometimes falling there!

   "Work—work—work!
   From weary chime to chime, 
Work—work—work,
   As prisoners work for crime!
Band, and gusset, and seam,
   Seam, and gusset, and band,
Till the heart is sick, and the brain benumbed,
   As well as the weary hand.

   "Work—work—work,
In the dull December light,
   And work—work—work,
When the weather is warm and bright—       
While underneath the eaves
   The brooding swallows cling
As if to show me their sunny backs
   And twit me with the spring.

   "O! but to breathe the breath
Of the cowslip and primrose sweet—
   With the sky above my head,
And the grass beneath my feet;
For only one short hour
   To feel as I used to feel,          
Before I knew the woes of want
   And the walk that costs a meal!

   "O! but for one short hour!
   A respite however brief!
No blessed leisure for Love or hope,
   But only time for grief!
A little weeping would ease my heart,
   But in their briny bed
My tears must stop, for every drop
   Hinders needle and thread!"

With fingers weary and worn,
   With eyelids heavy and red,
A woman sat in unwomanly rags,
   Plying her needle and thread—
      Stitch! stitch! stitch!
   In poverty, hunger, and dirt,
And still with a voice of dolorous pitch,—
Would that its tone could reach the Rich!—
   She sang this "Song of the Shirt!"




Illustration by Matt Coundiff for "Visage."

Friday, September 4, 2020

Story Round-Up: Features in The Herald-News, Aug. 29 through Sept. 4

Just had  lovely phone conversation with Sarah, a great way to start a sleepy Friday.

So without further commentary from me, here are some of the stories I wrote this week (not everything is published yet) and all the places I currently hang out on social media.

Have a great Friday!



Non-bylined features:

Search by topic (people, pets, A and E, faith, health, and food) at theherald-news.com.

Once a week, I do combine a week's worth into a single blog post.

Social media:

Daily updates: I do post the briefs on Twitter during the week, so you're welcome to follow me at @Denise_Unland61.

BryonySeries stuff: I post curated content relating to the BryonySeries at @BryonySeries. And assorted related content at www.facebook.com/BryonySeries.

And of course, please follow the adventures of Bertrand the Mouse on Instagram at bertrand_bryonyseries.

If you're a writer anywhere in the world, you're welcome to join WriteOn Joliet's Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/groups/writeonminooka/?ref=bookmarks. We're based in Joliet, Illinois, but we love to meet and interact with writers outside our area, too.

If you'd like to officially join WriteOn Joliet, we have two tiers of dues. We also have a marketing arm that's getting longer with each year. Check us out at writeonjoliet.com.

Upcoming BryonySeries events:

A full month of virtual events can be found at bryonyseries.com/fetes-and-feasts

Books and Such

Information on my books (including where to buy) along with upcoming events is at bryonyseries.com.

Newsletters:

Sign up for the Will County Go Guide

http://www.theherald-news.com/newsletter/will-county-go-guide/#//


Sign up for the LocalLit Short Story Newsletter

http://www.theherald-news.com/newsletter/locallit/


Sign up for The Munsonville Times

https://www.bryonyseries.com/munsonville-times

Questions?

Email me at bryonyseries@gmail.com.

Thank you for reading The Herald-News. And for reading this blog. And if you've read (or plan to read) any of my books. Your support is greatly appreciated.

Pets of the Week: Aug. 31

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/pets-of-the-week-aug-31/dypcm5o/


Frankfort sister celebrated 105th birthday with private brass concert
Sister M. Anna Clare Meyer has spent 85 years with FSSH community

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/09/01/frankfort-sister-will-celebrate-105th-birthday-with-private-brass-concert/a8qcw9/


A story I wrote for The Herald-News
Joliet resident makes sure kids have a 'safe and clean park' 

https://www.theherald-news.com/lists/2020/09/01/ab6701a25fb34ce7bbce0c0895bc8b0c/index.xml?page=1


LocalLit spotlight: 'Whispering Waves:' Poems for Everyday Grace

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/09/01/locallit-spotlight-whispering-waves-poems-for-everyday-grace/ag7h793/


Baran-Unland: My use of facemasks has strings attached

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/09/02/baran-unland-my-use-of-facemasks-has-strings-attached/avbokts/


Plainfield East teen grows 'victory' garden

https://www.theherald-news.com/lists/2020/09/01/5c195162666941288ab333a4345a46c6/index.xml?page=1


Hennessey to return to UCP in Joliet as executive director on Sept. 28

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/09/03/hennessey-to-return-to-ucp-in-joliet-as-executive-director-on-sept-28/atbd0dh/


Illustration by Matt Coundiff For "Visage."

Thursday, September 3, 2020

Random News From Here and There

How can it be Thursday already?

The work week has been a bit of blur, but I was "fairly" caught up by the end of Monday and kept moving forward.

Speaking of catching up, I've included links to some of the local happenings in The Herald-News readership area over the past couple of weeks.

Jennifer Wainwright, who created the Munsonville Main Street illustration for the landing page of the BryonySeries website (interview with her coming next week on this blog), is also working on an illustration for "Lycanthropic Summer," my werewolf novel I hope to release Oct. 1.

Here are some of her updates she sent me over the last week and a few drafts at the end of this blog when she sent some initial drafts.

However, "no peeks" on the final one until the book is released.

Base colors going on, more and detail to follow

It's all grey tones and, especially once I add the details with the heavy black ink, it will look much darker.

Yup! This is gonna be sweet.

You can't see it now, but I've also got rubber cement down in places under the wash so when it dries and I remove it, it will have stark white contrast highlights as well in the fur and some on the ground.

Shading done, heavy ink for detail and dark going on next. Still looking like you wanted?

I will definitely be able to finish by mid-September, maybe sooner if I manage some more free time this weekend.

I. Cannot. Wait.


Illinois State Museum's Lockport Gallery reopened Aug. 19 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/illinois-state-museums-lockport-gallery-to-reopen-aug-19/adp89gt/


Annual book collection event at Pilcher Park in Joliet cancelled
Sponsors hope to resume event in spring 2021 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/annual-book-collection-event-at-pilcher-park-in-joliet-cancelled/asw9hqo/


Wilmington Fire Protection District opens 2nd station

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/wilmington-fire-protection-district-opens-2nd-station/a609dfv/


Plainfield East High School teachers finish special education training 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/plainfield-east-high-school-teachers-finish-special-education-training/alod3xs/


Bridge photo carries New Lenox man to Forest Preserve photo contest win 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/18/bridge-photo-carries-new-lenox-man-to-forest-preserve-photo-contest-win/andxsq9/


New Lenox Girl Scouts install butterfly way station garden

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/new-lenox-girl-scouts-install-butterfly-way-station-garden/a8yq97r/


Veteran educator at D. 202 in Plainfield earns 2020 Niehus Award

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/18/veteran-educator-at-d-202-in-plainfield-earns-2020-niehus-award/a30rfvd/


Sign up for 'Yoga at the Park' for September in Plainfield 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/sign-up-for-yoga-at-the-park-for-september-in-plainfield/ae3lt7q/


Plainfield's library to go fine-free Sept. 1

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/20/plainfields-library-to-go-fine-free-sept-1/an56thh/


Shorewood-Troy Public Library reduces number of people allowed in library
Other mitigations in place at Shorewood library, too

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/shorewood-troy-public-library-reduces-number-of-people-allowed-in-library/aqt6qck/


'Napoleon Dynamite' at #Joliet theater rescheduled to 2021

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/napoleon-dynamite-at-joliet-theater-rescheduled-to-2021/aywid12/


Joliet-area organizations had curbside, back-to-school event 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/joliet-area-organizations-had-curbside-back-to-school-event/ayn5asf/


Despite remote learning, free meals continue
D. 86 in #Joliet offering free grab-and-go meals for its students

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/despite-remote-learning-free-meals-continue/ayepilc/


How to choose the best facemask for your child
Edward-Elmhurst Health offers tips to keep kids safe this fall from COVID-19 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/31/how-to-choose-the-best-facemask-for-your-child/a2jn0ww/


Drafts for "Lycanthropic Summer" by Jennifer Wainwright.




Tuesday, September 1, 2020

A Surprise Visit

Last night as I was finishing up some work, I heard a bang on the back door.

Then Rebekah yelled up the stairs, "Grab a mask and get down here!"

I yelled back, "No! I'm working. You handle it."

So she ran upstairs, opened my door, and repeated it.

With a glance at the clock and a big sigh at being interrupted, I grabbed a mask and stomped downstairs, wondering who dared cross the threshold of my deadlines.

And there, at the back door, were three of my grandchildren, paying ME a window visit.

I hadn't seen them since before the pandemic.

Now I was still on deadline, and the visit was brief.

No hugs, no kisses, and we all stayed more than six feet apart.

The youngest did take a step, poised to run at me for a hug, and she was told to step back. She was a little grumpy, and a little confused as she's only four, about that.

But we exchanged lots of "I love yous," and "I miss yous." It made my night. I'm still smiling this morning.

I saw on social media this past weekend about how one grandmother bought a character costume so she could hug her grandkids. It's an idea, definitely.

Earlier in the day, I had griped to my WriteOn Joliet co-leader about missing my older children and THEIR children as we also griped about the rising positivity numbers in Will County and having to schedule yet another virtual meeting for our critique group this Thursday.

It's true that this pandemic has taken away peoples lives, livelihoods, income, and close contact with people they love.

But it has brought creativity and ingenuity in the quest for vaccines and treatments, work form home and remote learning models, and ways to "stay close," as well a determination that negativity won't be the final word.







Monday, August 31, 2020

A Beautiful Back-To-Work Monday Morning

See this old blurry cell phone photo of me and two of my cats?

One is Midnight, who is going under anesthesia this morning for dental work (good thoughts, please) and the other is Hope, who is having a carefree and happy life in Morris, and I can't wait to see her again!

So this photo was taken of me on January 7, 2014, at my oldest son's former apartment in Channahon, where I often worked when we lost our home when I and my three youngest adult kids were staying with my mother.

January 7 is Old Calendar, or Julian Calendar, Christmas. It's the day our immediate family celebrates Christmas as an immediate family.

It was less than one week before I became an employee of Shaw Media, who had just bought (at that time) The Herald-News in Joliet.

I had built a freelance career as a single parent, starting in 1998. But by 2014, my husband had dementia, we had lost our home, the pay for freelance writing was decreasing, and a new company now owned the publication where three-fourths of my freelance earnings came.

My youngest two kids were at Joliet Junior College. My oldest had just graduated and was working part time, the most he could do, because he and I (mostly he) had the most flexible time to break down a house with eighty years of living packed inside it (my husband's parents had built that house; we moved into it fall of 1999).

The money writing was on the wall. I needed to find a full-time job somewhere. The writing career, as a full-time career, was done, although I hoped to juggle a few assignments a week to keep my skills sharp.

I had just wanted to get past Christmas before I started looking in earnest. And I wanted to give myself some time and space to say good-bye to that chapter in my life.

But after January 7, an amazing whirlwind of events transpired.

I was asked to come into The Herald-News to interview for the features editor position.

I was told to keep working on assignments because the company still wanted me to freelance even if I wasn't hired.

Two days after the interview, I received a call and a job offer, which I, of course, accepted.

I continued working as a freelancer for The Herald-News until my start date of January 15.

On the start date, I was completely overwhelmed (I didn't realize until the end of the day I was sick). At the end of the day, I went to the managing editor's office and quit.

She told me to stay.

I did.

And I muddled through those first blurry days of learning new procedures and technology sick. I was sick three times in the first eight weeks.

However, I have not, yet to this day (although that can't possibly last forever), taken a sick day.

Why is this important today?

Because I'm just coming off the first bit of unregulated time since before my junior year in high school.

It was hard-earned time, and I made good use of it.

But you will not hear me moan - not ever - about "having" to come back to work.

Watching the journalism industry change all those years of freelancing (fifteen in all), I never dreamed I would work as an actual employee. I didn't even aspire to it. So have that all change "in the blink of an eye" was life-changing.

I am blessed, and I do mean blessed, to be working in that industry as an employee today. Sure, I have days where I'm mentally done by the end of it. Sure, I have days where I'd rather chase a rabbit trail than get to task. Who doesn't?

But I'm not only grateful to have a job I can not only work from home, but where I'm told to work from home, during a pandemic, I'm grateful to have THIS job, and I am happy for to work this job for as long as this position is available to me.

So today I return to work. And I am happy and grateful to be here.

So below were my goals for last week.

If it looks like a lot, you're right. But it feels good to be done with them, too.

Again, I'm very happy to be back to work.


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. DONE.

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Moved to next weekend. Art is about half done. We also have a companion book in the early planning stages to be released with this one. But I'm not sharing details for now.

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home. DONE. And the next two are in "talks." The goal is three a year. Hopefully I'll be busy writing them this fall.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. DONE

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. DONE-ish. Struggling with some phrasing. Working with her on it.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand the Mouse book.  DONE. We should have three books ready in time for holiday gift buying.

MISCELLANEOUS GOALS:

Go through boxes with Rebekah: We broke down all but three. Most of them contain various memorabilia with place to put those items right now. We moved them from the downstairs closet to my bedroom closet.

Exercise: I made or came pretty close to my step/calorie burn per day (20,000 to 23,000 steps and eight to ten miles). Yoga and weights declined drastically. One day of weights, one of yoga.

Three letters to write and mail: Two DONE. Hoping the last one goes today..

More than 1,000 pieces of email that piled up this week. More than half was work email. I've made a small dent there this morning. I hadn't anticipated some training on Sunday afternoon (see below).

Made a Monday list for work and one phone call: DONE.

Cleaned my room: DONE

Finished residual edits for a client: DONE

Looked through a manuscript for a potential client: DONE

Pandemic short story: More on this later. On my list for a LONG time. NEARLY DONE. More done than I thought I'd get it.

One Note/OneDrive Training: DONE-ish. It will take more than one training for me to get it right.







Saturday, August 29, 2020

Just Two Days Left of the At-Home Writing Retreat

So am I meeting my goals?


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. DONE. Rough first drafts for most of them, some better than that. Super tired by 8:30 p.m. last night and almost decided "good enough." But I put on a cup of coffee (something new Rebekah bought), settled down at the desk with Faith (my calico cat) on my lap, and finished the last chapter.

Then I skimmed through the entire novel, making sure the pieces connected and adding details where they didn't. I'm glad this morning I didn't cave last night. This was the main project, and the sense of accomplishment is huge.

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Projected release date is Oct. 1. Texted back and forth with the artist for this late last night (yes, as I was skimming through The Phoenix). Illustration looks stunning. Cover art is about halfway done.

We also have a companion book in the early planning stages to be released with this one. But I'm not sharing details for now.

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. Tomorrow.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. Today

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Today or tomorrow.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand the Mouse book. The goal is three a year, and I should now make that goal in time for Christmas purchases. The planning is either done or in progress (depending on the book). Rebekah is working on it.

Bonus: Jotted down some very early ideas for The Emporium Orphans because so many good ideas pop into my head while I'm trying to go to sleep, so I sleep with pen and paper. 

Also, while The Emporium Orphans sounds like a very strange title for a book, those who've read Staked! might not think so. That book (most likely) is a couple years down the road, but who knows?

And while the scribblings in the photos don't seem like much, they're actually placeholders for my thoughts, so a good first outlining is mentally in progress.

I hope Ed Calkins is meeting his goals for Ruthless. Can't wait to read it!


Friday, August 28, 2020

Story Round-Up: Features in The Herald-News, Aug. 22 through Aug. 28 (and Retreat Update)

Story roundup? How can that be? Wasn't I on an at-home writing retreat all week?

Yes - but not all stories post the same day. The ones featured today ran over last week, when I was already mind-deep into the nineteenth century.

Not much has changed from yesterday's retreat update, except that I only have a chapter and a half to finish of an extremely rough draft of The Phoenix, which I really hope I get done today as I have a full list for Saturday and Sunday.

It probably doesn't sound like a lot, but I've been dancing around (i.e. avoiding and skipping over) one particularly troublesome chapter, hoping the muse would kick in eventually (It hasn't).

So...yeah.

Below, you will find all the places I currently hang out on social media.

Below that, are the stories. Pick and choose what interests you. Of course, I hope they all interest you.

Have a great Friday!



Non-bylined features:

Search by topic (people, pets, A and E, faith, health, and food) at theherald-news.com.

Once a week, I do combine a week's worth into a single blog post.

Social media:

Daily updates: I do post the briefs on Twitter during the week, so you're welcome to follow me at @Denise_Unland61.

BryonySeries stuff: I post curated content relating to the BryonySeries at @BryonySeries. And assorted related content at www.facebook.com/BryonySeries.

And of course, please follow the adventures of Bertrand the Mouse on Instagram at bertrand_bryonyseries.

If you're a writer anywhere in the world, you're welcome to join WriteOn Joliet's Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/groups/writeonminooka/?ref=bookmarks. We're based in Joliet, Illinois, but we love to meet and interact with writers outside our area, too.

If you'd like to officially join WriteOn Joliet, we have two tiers of dues. We also have a marketing arm that's getting longer with each year. Check us out at writeonjoliet.com.

Upcoming BryonySeries events:

A full month of virtual events can be found at bryonyseries.com/fetes-and-feasts

Books and Such

Information on my books (including where to buy) along with upcoming events is at bryonyseries.com.

Newsletters:

Sign up for the Will County Go Guide

http://www.theherald-news.com/newsletter/will-county-go-guide/#//


Sign up for the LocalLit Short Story Newsletter

http://www.theherald-news.com/newsletter/locallit/


Sign up for The Munsonville Times

https://www.bryonyseries.com/munsonville-times

Questions?

Email me at bryonyseries@gmail.com.

Thank you for reading The Herald-News. And for reading this blog. And if you've read (or plan to read) any of my books. Your support is greatly appreciated.



LocalLit spotlight: 'Whispering Waves:' Poems for Everyday Grace
(Review comes out this Tuesday)

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/20/locallit-spotlight-whispering-waves-poems-for-everyday-grace/a919u03/


Coronavirus forces Joliet Job Corps to make changes

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/20/coronavirus-forces-joliet-job-corps-to-make-changes/am7flrl/


Annual mental health event in New Lenox moves online this year

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/21/annual-mental-health-event-moves-online-this-year/agnhakf/


A quick and easy way to help a Will County senior

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/21/a-quick-and-easy-way-to-help-a-will-county-senior/ab735e0/


Elwood students return to school with hybrid learning

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/21/elwood-students-return-to-school-with-hybrid-learning/dt0dsen/


Pets of the Week: Aug. 24

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/20/pets-of-the-week-aug-24/dal9hoz/


"Three Joliet area novelists share insights on crime fiction"
Val Bruech, Mike Markley and Sue Merrell discuss their crime novels

(The story is a couple years old, but the insights are the same and the books are still available).

https://www.theherald-news.com/2016/08/30/three-joliet-area-novelists-share-insights-on-crime-fiction/adjm263/



Illustration by Matt Coundiff for "Visage."

Thursday, August 27, 2020

Almost to 500,000 (and Retreat Update)

As I write this, I am just 1, 702 away from 500,000 total views. I realized as I wrote the title that someone might think 500,000 words this week. Ha, I'm not even close to being that good.

Now, it did take slightly over a decade to reach it (My first post was Aug. 1, 2010), and the blog still doesn't show many followers, but I've found anyone can "like" or "follow" and that means little compared to people who read faithfully over time.

And I'm sure any vague number of those views are bots. But not all of them.

Writing, as a career or dedicated hobby, is a long game. While some people may get lucky, or even rewarded or even blessed in the early stages, many of us need to write and revise long and often to build up relationships and trust with readers.

Speaking of relationships and trust, the writing retreat is entering its home stretch. For those who have virtually taken this journey with me in the form of checking into this blog, how am I coming along with the goals with just four days left?

All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. This is first and foremost. Four chapters to go, two today and two tomorrow. I think it's do-able. Keep in mind most of the writing is weak, sloppy, and not fit for readers at this stage. But it's out of me and into the computer, where it belongs. That's a good start, I think, and we are talking about 30,000 words or so in the span of a week.

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important. However, I am moving this project to next weekend. The art isn't ready to go yet, so I won't gain anything by getting it done this week, and I will lose the time for other projects if I tackle it now.

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books in this series a year, and I'm just on the first one for 2020. So, yes, I'm way behind. The plan as of today is to finish writing the last two chapters on Sunday afternoon, a gentle way to end the retreat. Copy editing can wait until next weekend (maybe even one chapter at a time after work this week since the chapters are short and light).

But first on Sunday, I plan to sift through hundreds of work email. I don't want to waste valuable time on Monday with this task, and it's a way to transition my mind back where it needs to be.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix. However, the week went askew, so this will be completed on Saturday.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. By Saturday.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three books in this series a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind. A new book, and possibly three, is now in the "works."

Even though the end of the retreat is in sight, it's not over yet, and it's important I stay the course as much as possible. No sleeping hare habits for me!

True, life can intervene. And if it does, I'll have my priorities in order.

Still - it would feel nice to make the goal.

Don't you agree?

Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony."

Wednesday, August 26, 2020

Halfway Point (Yes, a Retreat Update and Encouraging Words for All)

Today is Wednesday, and it's usually the day I become grouchy and fed-up with the entire process.

I actually kind of hit that Monday through yesterday, in pieces. I think I'm over it.

What helped?

Last night I was working on a chapter I'd started one night because it was a good chapter for writing at night, you know, mood and all.

But to get back into it, I had to re-read parts of it. And some of it was actually pretty good. That was extremely encouraging.

So if you need encouragement today, here's my suggestion. Step back from the trees a moment and look at the forest. Review what's gone right and what you've done well.

It sounds simple, right? So simple, we often don't do it.

Lose your temper today? Remind yourself where you kept it.

Missed an opportunity to be kind? Remind yourself when you didn't.

Bathroom won't pass CDC inspections? Yes, but all the laundry is done. (OK, some of the laundry. Or at least you've bought laundry detergent).

Burned the chicken? But the mashed potatoes are wonderfully fluffy.

Your writing sucks? So does mine. But apparently not all of it.

You fell off the diet? But you've also spent weeks increasing your portions of fresh vegetables.

Build on the comments at the right. Root out the other ones, the weeds in your goals.

Keep planting your dreams and celebrating your harvest.


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. I can't tell if I'm slightly behind or slightly ahead. I'm looking at two partial chapters today and one complete one. So right on track?

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

So far:

Nearly two chapter drafts of The Phoenix each day, and that's it.

Slightly behind, but yesterday was a day of intermittent interruptions and one health emergency for my oldest son.

But at this rate, I'll have all of the chapters of The Phoenix drafted by Saturday morning.

And I'll still have the weekend to finish the plan.

That is the plan from a Wednesday morning point of view.



Illustration by Christopher Gleason for "Staked!"

Tuesday, August 25, 2020

Going Backwards (and Retreat Update)

While many writers enjoy the exhilaration, creativity, and freedom of first drafts, I'm not one of them.

I felt that slew of emotions with the first two and half books in the "drop of blood" trilogy and then I hit some serious writer's block and abandoned the third for a few months.

By then, I had a contract with a small press and had begun the serious editing process. Watching my words take on the shape of what I had really meant to write was the real sense of satisfaction.

First drafts are not like that.

As are many "firsts" in life, I suppose.

All sense of polish and shine aren't the writer's friends in those early drafts. In order to get the words out, especially in such rapid fashion as I'm doing this week, you must resort to weak and clumsy and cliche - everything writers try to avoid.

Writing this way feels like going backwards. But you know the old saying.

But even as writers push forward, a part of them should remain comfortable with their own sloppy writing. During the drafting stage, it's important not to get hung up on phrasing, mood (except to simply state it), deep characterization and setting, the five senses, etc. until to, again, state the intention.

The clean-up comes later. But you can't clean-up a mess you didn't make. You can't prune a plant you didn't grow. You can't refine words you didn't write.

So for any writer out there (or anyone, really) in their same routine who thinks I'm currently sitting in a dreamy, caffeinated haze while swimming in my imagination, that's not happening.

But the words are happening. And I'll be very happy I wrote them when, next weekend, I want to spend Saturday editing a chapter I wrote this past week. And I'll be happy the following Saturday, too, when I want to do the same thing.

I'm happy now, too, of course. Happy that I work for a company that gives me vacation time. Happy for the opportunity to spend a week working on a goal. Happy for a family that supports my rather pointless writing and isn't spending too much luring me away from it. Happy for the calico cat who lets me have nearly have my desk chair.

Happy for the hot weather this week that makes it sensible to stay inside writing. And happy, of course, for coffee and imagination.

So am I hitting the goal?


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. This is first and foremost. And I started on it yesterday afternoon and wrote until my brain shut off at 9:30 p.m. (but I did have an extremely short night of sleep Thursday into Friday).

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

So far:

Nearly two chapter drafts of The Phoenix each day, and that's it.

Slightly behind, but yesterday was a day of intermittent interruptions and one health emergency for my oldest son.

But at this rate, I'll have all of the chapters of The Phoenix drafted by Saturday morning.

And I'll still have the weekend to finish the plan.

That is the plan from a Tuesday morning point of view.

Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony."

Monday, August 24, 2020

Boxes (and Retreat Update)

I started an at-home writing retreat this week, a little modified from the ones I took back in 2018.

That time, I wrote and only wrote, forsaking both social media and exercise.

This year, I'm still exercising. It's foolish to stop, and I do quite a bit of mental writing this way, which makes me more efficient at the computer.

Also, the subject matter is dark, so keeping some positive connections is a healthy thing to do.

So instead of fourteen to sixteen hours of writing a day, it's looking more like ten to twelve.

Here are the goals. Below that, what I've accomplished.

All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. This is first and foremost. And I started on it yesterday afternoon and wrote until my brain shut off at 9:30 p.m. (but I did have an extremely short night of sleep Thursday into Friday).

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

So far:

Nearly two chapter drafts of The Phoenix each day, and that's it.

Under the circumstances, not bad.

"Circumstances" being I didn't start until mid-afternoon on Friday, my second son Joshua (child number three) turned thirty-five yesterday, so I spend some time on the phone with him, and we had a family issue come up yesterday, too.

Oh, and I took a two-hour nap on Saturday and a two-hour nap on Sunday. So that really cut into my writing time, too. (I really, really needed those naps).

What about the boxes?

Well, I still have boxes to unpack from when we lost our home in 2013. Since we discarded mostly everything, I don't have many. But they're still there.

I promised Rebekah we would unpack a box a day during the retreat, to be continued on each vacation day to the end of the year, until all the boxes are unpacked.

I think that's do-able, don't you?



Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony."

Saturday, August 22, 2020

It Has Begun...

Thanks (or "no thanks") to covid, I am not gong to Raleigh this year to spend a week with Sarah and her family.

I also won't be seeing my parents, who live near her and are in their mid-80s.

So I'm off to Munsonville instead, which exists nowhere except in my mind and in the mind of anyone who's read my books, and in this beautiful piece of art at the bottom of this blog.

Translation: I'm taking an at-home writing retreat.

I have an ambitious list and don't intend to waste the time or the coffee.

Having taken a similar retreat a couple of these two years ago when airfare was prohibitive, I know how the progression works.

The first few days feel awesome, like a kid on summer vacation. My schedule and my routine is gone, and the alarm clock is silenced. No deadlines! No homework! Just "play" writing! Yay!!!

But the feeling is a lie. Because I have a self-made list of goals and deadlines sitting at my left. I can't miss it anytime I glance down. And if I'm sipping coffee, i'm glancing down a lot.

And like any summer vacation, the at-home writing retreat will get stale, usually by Tuesday afternoon. You know that feeling when all you eat is confectionery? Yeah, it's like that. The first few bites of a dark chocolate bar are amazing. But try working your way through a three-pound bar, ugh.

By Wednesday, I'm still waking up early and immediately staggering to the computer. By now I'm cranky and sick of everything: sick of writing, computers, coffee (hard to believe, but true), my BryonySeries, walking, music, the current project - all of it.

By Thursday afternoon, the pressure returns. My list of uncrossed items stares me in the face as I write, reminding me the list was way to prolific and that I won't get it done.

By Friday, I'm wondering where the week went and where I lost the time.

And by Saturday, even though it's a weekend, my mind is straying back to work and preparing itself for Monday.

So what's on the list?

All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. This is first and foremost. And I started on it yesterday afternoon and wrote until my brain shut off at 9:30 p.m. (but I did have an extremely short night of sleep Thursday into Friday).

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

Wish me luck. I'm gonna need it.

(First side note: Why do I do this? Especially since, you know, I'm a local self-published author with a handful of readers. Well, I do it for the readers. This is paramount, and I'm very serious. If just one person wants to read it, I want to write it. Second, it develops me as a writer, which is useful for my work writing, the most important writing I will ever write. Third, it develops my imagination, which I think keeps me creative and mentally young. Both are traits for a good life, I think).

(Second side note: An interview with this very talented artist of the illustration will be coming the week after the retreat. And she, along with my other artists, are available for hire).

(Third note: Please excuse any typos, please and thank you).







Friday, August 21, 2020

Story Round-Up: Features in The Herald-News, Aug. 8 through Aug. 21

Good morning!

I have twenty-three stories to share so I will keep commentary to a minimum.

I didn't post a roundup last week because I was still struggling in the aftermath of the derecho (uneven electrical power and internet).

Today I am wrapping up some work stories because I'm off work until a week from Monday as I  have vacation time I have to use. Since I can't go to Raleigh and visit family (Falls Lake, I'm looking at you, too), I am taking an in-home writing retreat.

I did a similar retreat a couple years ago when I couldn't justify the outrageous airfare. Last time I stayed off social media and concentrated only writing (like sixteen hours at a time for over a week - this was not fun).

This year, because my topic matter is so dark, I'll most likely pop in and out of social media I don't think it's healthy, frankly, to stay in a dark place for that many hours for that many days on purpose, even for the sake of "great art." (wink).

OK, that's enough from me.

Keep scrolling to find all the place I hang out online.

Below that, are the stories. Pick and choose what interests you. Of course, I hope they all interest you.

Have a great Friday!



Non-bylined features:

Search by topic (people, pets, A and E, faith, health, and food) at theherald-news.com.

Once a week, I do combine a week's worth into a single blog post.

Social media:

Daily updates: I do post the briefs on Twitter during the week, so you're welcome to follow me at @Denise_Unland61.

BryonySeries stuff: I post curated content relating to the BryonySeries at @BryonySeries. And assorted related content at www.facebook.com/BryonySeries.

And of course, please follow the adventures of Bertrand the Mouse on Instagram at bertrand_bryonyseries.

If you're a writer anywhere in the world, you're welcome to join WriteOn Joliet's Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/groups/writeonminooka/?ref=bookmarks. We're based in Joliet, Illinois, but we love to meet and interact with writers outside our area, too.

If you'd like to officially join WriteOn Joliet, we have two tiers of dues. We also have a marketing arm that's getting longer with each year. Check us out at writeonjoliet.com.

Upcoming BryonySeries events:

A full month of virtual events can be found at bryonyseries.com/fetes-and-feasts

Books and Such

Information on my books (including where to buy) along with upcoming events is at bryonyseries.com.

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Family of special needs Joliet West teen desperately needs a new van 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/19/family-of-special-needs-joliet-west-teen-desperately-needs-a-new-van/adzoebq/


LocalLit book spotlight: 'Lost in Peter's Tomb'

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/06/locallit-book-spotlight-lost-in-peters-tomb/akx542x/

And the review

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/09/locallit-book-review-lost-in-peters-tomb/ae5se2z/


Bringing veterans together while keeping them apart
Free monthly event in Manhattan pays respect to those who served

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/06/bringing-veterans-together-while-keeping-them-apart/albq4yk/


Joliet honors the city's most outstanding yards 

https://www.theherald-news.com/lists/2020/08/06/bc04983611c441bbbc5b88dce5af9077/index.xml?page=1


Former Homer Glen resident won #Emmy for work on 'The Kelly Clarkson Show' 

https://www.theherald-news.com/lists/2020/08/07/a8317623f2914dc495913cf7f8b5c0f7/index.xml?page=1


Pets of the Week: Aug.11

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/06/pets-of-the-week-aug-11/djw8bx1/


LocalLit book spotlight: 'Into the Hidden Lands'

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/12/locallit-book-spotlight-into-the-hidden-lands/aci5yb0/

And its review

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/locallit-book-review-into-the-hidden-lands/a4jgqaw/


An Extraordinary Life: 'He gave up his band for his family'
Joliet man exemplified faithfulness to the end

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/09/he-gave-up-his-band-for-his-family/dsvcxfc/


"Residents 'of every color imaginable' gather to clean up storm debris in Joliet subdivision"

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/11/residents-of-every-color-imaginable-gather-to-clean-up-storm-debris-in-joliet-subdivision/d7e9vb/


Plainfield store gave away hundreds of boxes of free produce in 90 minutes 

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/12/plainfield-store-gave-away-hundreds-of-boxes-of-free-produce-in-90-minutes/d65gbc6/


Brooding about covid? Shred instead
Joliet bank hosting 2nd annual shred day to bring people together

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/12/brooding-about-covid-shred-instead/aa8x0em/


An Extraordinary Life: 'She would not watch TV without picking up her needles'

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/14/an-extraordinary-life-she-would-not-watch-tv-without-picking-up-her-needles/d4bz34l/


Joliet woman rescues baby squirrel displaced by Monday's derecho

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/14/joliet-woman-rescues-baby-squirrel-displaced-by-mondays-derecho/abcvlgj/


Pets of the Week: Aug. 17

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/14/pets-of-the-week-aug-17/d3ktwmy/


"Photos: Derecho devastation on Joliet's west side"

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/10/photos-derecho-devastation-on-joliets-west-side/dhwzvk0/


A really sweet story I wrote for The Herald-News


Despite unrest in Chicago, 'No one is going to go hungry' at Ronald McDonald House
House near Lurie's was not shot, staff and food was on-site that night

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/12/despite-unrest-in-chicago-no-one-is-going-to-go-hungry-at-ronald-mcdonald-house/alaanyi/


Joliet cancer patient celebrated his 2nd birthday at home after all

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/11/joliet-cancer-patient-celebrated-his-2nd-birthday-at-home-after-all/d4a0b3r/


Joliet toddler with cancer missed 2nd birthday at home due to Chicago riots
Discharge from Chicago hospital delayed, great-grandma says

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/10/joliet-toddler-with-cancer-missed-2nd-birthday-at-home-due-to-chicago-riots/a5q9sad/


Mystery Diner: McWethy's Tavern in Romeoville will keep you coming back for more

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/17/mcwethys-tavern-in-romeoville-will-keep-you-coming-back-for-more/dculx4y/


"Couple 'devastated' about losing home, cats, photographs in Joliet explosion"
State fire marshal spokesman had no information on investigation of incident

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/19/couple-devastated-about-losing-home-cats-photographs-in-joliet-explosion/ayrwnrn/



Illustration by Matt Coundiff for "Visage."

Thursday, August 20, 2020

BryonySeries Throwback Thursday: The Upside of a Crisis

Stumbled upon this post from two years ago...


Tuesday, August 14, 2018

The Upside of a Crisis


Lately, I've been sifting through the drafts folder of this blog, looking at posts partly begun or, more the case, studying titles that are nothing more than titles and wondering about my intent.

This is one I titled on Oct. 14, 2010. And the other day, I stumbled upon this Bible verse:

 "Though the fig tree should not blossom, nor fruit be on the vines, the produce of the olive fail and the fields yield no food, the flock be cut off from the fold and there be no herd in the stalls,  yet I will rejoice in the Lord; I will take joy in the God of my salvation." Habakkuk 3:17-18

I can't say exactly what I intended to write that day. But I can certainly guess...and perhaps guess why this post was never written.

In August of that month, I had my eighth surgery (I've had six C/sections, one adrenalectomy, and the eighth to repair damage from the other seven). Recovery was fine for a couple weeks and then I had a HUGE flareup of hives (I've had chronic hives since 2002).

It sounds simple, but it wasn't. First of all, it's a chronic immune disorder, and I can't describe how awful the combinations of chemicals being released in one's body feels. I remember a nurse at one point taking my blood pressure and backing off a bit, because she could "feel" them.

A couple different medications were added to the regime. My body reacted pretty badly to them, and they didn't help the hives. Right around Oct. 14, could even have been Oct. 14, in the late afternoon, my doctor decided to hospitalize me.

I called my husband to tell him, and he said he was just going to call me. He had lost his job. And he wasn't laid off.

His job was half our income. And our insurance would be gone in two weeks. We had two weeks to figure out my health issue (which took another two months). He never did get another job; and we eventually lost the house his parents had built.
  
We've done a lot of rebuilding since then.

But during that time, when our fig tree didn't blossom, and we didn't have fruit on our vines, and the produce of everything we had built on that property (including the places we remodeled and added to accommodate a youth group we ran for four years) stopped yielding, and our fields (and sometimes our cupboards and refrigerator) had little food, and we were cut off from our folds, and our herd of cats went to live in a small apartment, we never NOT rejoiced in the Lord.

Some days, rejoicing in the Lord was all we had to rejoice in.

We...I...didn't think about it that way at the time. It was a dark time. I remember telling one son how good God was to prepare us for death by giving us little deaths and losses along the way...

But seeing this verse brought that time to my attention in a particular way. Even when everything (and everyone) else fails us, we can still in the Lord, we can take joy in the God of our salvation.

That is the upside of a crisis.

Illustration by Matt Counfiff for "Visage."

Tuesday, August 18, 2020

No Reach Too Small (or How These Words Made a Big Impact)

...and came full circle, too).

Back in February, my oldest daughter Sarah, who now lives in North Carolina, called me and asked if I could write a story on a Joliet toddler that was just diagnosed with cancer.

Sarah knew the aunt and gave me the phone number. I wrote a story and included the GoFundMe link.

The story was so heart-wrenching, I wrote a second.

And when the GoFundMe page stalled this summer, I wrote another in early July.

This past week, due to exceptional circumstances in the toddler's life, I wrote four more.

After the first of the four, the toddler's mom called me. Chicago media had seen the stories and reached out to her. Overnight the GoFundMe account doubled - and then nearly doubled again a couple days later.

In under a week, the account had grown from $20,000 to nearly $75,000. Most of that, I'm certain, was a result of the Chicago coverage.

But my coverage led to the Chicago coverage. And I'm thrilled to be part of the chain that led to it.

Now I'll tell you about the fourth story. A mother emailed me last Frudat. Her daughter wanted to donate any money that would have been spent on her eighth birthday to the toddler.

This family did not know Sarah, and why would they?

But ironically, they were from North Carolina. The mom had seen the story on Twitter.

So about the stories...

I found the Fox News link so I'm adding it here.

Next I'll add the links to the stories I wrote, most recent to oldest.

Finally, I'll add the GoFundMe link.

The family will need help for a long time. Please consider donating.

The takeaway? 

For those who speak, for those who write: words have reach, words have power.

Your words can be the words someone really needs to hear today.

Or they can be the words someone really does not need to hear today.

There is a time to use words and a time for silence.

But even if your reach is only inches, and you have an important message to say, don't squelch it.

For you never know where those words will travel and whom they will touch, inspire, motivate, encourage, or maybe even shame or discourage, if the intention is for good.

So much attention is given to "viral" and "famous" and "the most."

But "small" and "still" can do mighty things, too.

I was reminded of that last week.

Have a most blessed day!


Parents of 2-year-old cancer patient in Chicago speak out after looters smash door, ransack Ronald McDonald House



A really sweet story I wrote for The Herald-News


Despite unrest in Chicago, 'No one is going to go hungry' at Ronald McDonald House
House near Lurie's was not shot, staff and food was on-site that night

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/12/despite-unrest-in-chicago-no-one-is-going-to-go-hungry-at-ronald-mcdonald-house/alaanyi/


Joliet cancer patient celebrated his 2nd birthday at home after all

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/11/joliet-cancer-patient-celebrated-his-2nd-birthday-at-home-after-all/d4a0b3r/


Joliet toddler with cancer missed 2nd birthday at home due to Chicago riots
Discharge from Chicago hospital delayed, great-grandma says

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/08/10/joliet-toddler-with-cancer-missed-2nd-birthday-at-home-due-to-chicago-riots/a5q9sad/


Whatever happened to baby Owen?
Joliet toddler still waging the cancer war - and he's not even 2 yet

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/07/08/whatever-happened-to-baby-owen/aqjuntl/


'It's all over his body'
Joliet family staying positive as their toddler battles cancer

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/02/24/its-all-over-his-body/dyjrfsc/


'He was always a happy and smiling baby'
Joliet toddler fighting tumor, family needs financial help

https://www.theherald-news.com/2020/02/08/he-was-always-a-happy-and-smiling-baby/db5ec9m/


Help for baby Owen Buell and his Family

https://www.gofundme.com/f/help-for-baby-owen-and-his-family



Photo by Matt Coundiff for "Visage."