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Showing posts with label writing recap. Show all posts

Monday, September 16, 2024

Results of 2nd At-Home Writing Retreat of 2024

Last week I used vacation time to take a second at-home writing retreat. My goal was to prepare the eight remaining chapters for a novel-in-progress for final editing and to (HOPEFULLY) release before 2024 ends.

Despite a retreat that wasn't quite a retreat (LOTS of life happening, too), I am happy to report that I made my goal.

The novel is called “House on Top of the Hill” and it’s the third book in the BryonySeries Limbo series. The first and second books in that series are “The Phoenix” and “Call of the Siren.”

I conceived the concept for the BryonySeries Limbo trilogy in early 2019. During Christmas break later that year, I had all three books outlined.

Before I go further, the store page on the BryonySeries website will provide more about the individual titles I'll be mentioning in this post. There are far, far too many titles to hyperlink in this blog.

Oh, and the store is closed for renovations, most likely until Timothy finishes his master's degree in February. But the store link will take you to the full list of books on Amazon. 

Now back to our regularly scheduled program.

It feels good to near the finish line of what could be my last novel.

My fiction focus for the next few years will be completing the last four books in the Girls of the BryonySeries and catching up with The Adventures of Cornell Dyer series. Both are subseries in the overarching BryonySeries world.

Plus, I have tons of Bertrand photos for future books I need to address.

Now, I could be wrong about “House on Top of the Hill” being the last novel. But at age sixty-three, I want to be sure I finish these other BryonySeries books, while I’m still able to finish them. So I'm definitely not bidding creative writing good-bye. I have plenty of book projects to last me a long time.

Also, for anyone who has read the BryonySeries, this "House on Top of the Hill" brings the series to a nice full circle. 

You see, if one starts with the drop of blood trilogy (“Bryony,” “Visage,” and “Staked!”),  the five installments of “Before The Blood” becomes a terrific prequel to the series. Limbo then fills in the time period between “drop” and BTB, the eighty years when nothing seemingly happens.

Or if one reads the books in chronological order – beginning with “Before The Blood,” and then moving onto to Limbo and then “drop of blood,” the novel “Staked!” gives a nice finish to the series. 

And if you start with Limbo, you can read BTB and “drop” to see what happened before and what happens after, which also works quite logically, especially since "drop" seamlessly follows "House on Top of the Hill."

Now, I don’t want to forget HOW to write a novel. And who knows? I might have another lurking in my brain somewhere, just waiting for the right time to show itself.

Or perhaps I’ll co-write a novel or helps other authors polish theirs. But from my viewpoint on this Monday morning, “House on Top of the Hill” is likely my last novel.

Of course, I did say that after “Before The Blood,” too. 

And if we want to travel down that path, I really only intended to write one novel, “Bryony.” But the story was too big for one book. 

Fine, I thought. I’ll write a sequel. But the story was too big for THAT book, too.

Fine. A trilogy then. Except now I had all this background backstory and my little band of fans for “drop of blood” wanted to read the series back story, which turned into an eight-year project for the five installments.

So there you have it. A series that overtook itself much like the poisonous bryony took over Simons Mansion, the Simons estate, and worked its way into the woods (which wasn’t Simons Woods after all, as you shall see in "House on Top of the Hill").

A quick word about the structure of this latest novel. Despite the wording of the synopsis (see below), none of the story is actually told from the perspective of Steve Barnes.

Instead the novel, which spans forty - fairly consecutively - years, is told through a slew of different protagonists in a seemingly short story format. But the chapters all possess an underlying theme, recurring characters, and an ending that won't make sense if you skip to it first.

Anyway, here is the synopsis. Below the synopsis are the chapter titles and cover image by Timothy Baran.

Happy Monday!

Change comes slowly to Munsonville, and for Steve Barnes, who spends his entire life in the village, that's just fine. From boyhood to manhood, he savors the slow pace and friendly smiles, even while working by his parents' side from sunup to sundown to run the family diner.

The only blight is this fishing village's preoccupation with an empty mansion in the woods, whose tales of former glory and catastrophe fueled a rampage of ghost stories. Steve doesn't believe them, but some do – and no no one can deny the power the crumbling old building holds over them.

Especially when it changes everyone, including Steve, forever.

Prologue

Chapter 1: The Traveling Salesman

Chapter 2: Roundtable

Chapter 3: Bottle of the Red Stuff

Chapter 4: Cracking Open the Nest Egg

Chapter 5: Picture Postcards

Chapter 6: Whispers of the Heart

Chapter 7: I Run at Night

Chapter 8: Laid to Rest

Chapter 9: Necking

Chapter 10: Spider and Fly

Chapter 11: Death Heard Round the World

Chapter 12: Mine

Chapter 13: Second Sight

Chapter 14: Chop, Sizzle, Broil, and Bake

Chapter 15: The Rage

Chapter 16: Hard Choice to Make

Chapter 17: Through the Camera’s Eye

Chapter 18: Words Enough For Me

Chapter 19: The All-Hallowed Albatross

Chapter 20: Dancing in the Past

Chapter 21: The New Professor

Chapter 22: Enigma in Residence

Chapter 23: Rain

Chapter 24: From Fry Pan to Factotum

Chapter 25: Nutty Tina Swanson

Chapter 26: Preternatural Guest

Chapter 27: A New Lease on a Very Old Dream

Chapter 28: The News That Changed Everything

Chapter 29: Journey of a Thousand Heartaches

Chapter 30: Severed Links

Epilogue



Tuesday, May 28, 2024

Recap of My First At-Home Writing Retreat of 2024

Last week, I took my first at-home writing retreat of 2024, which I will pick back up on Friday, Saturday, and Sunday when it's my turn for a three day weekend (I worked Memorial Day).

The book I'm currently writing is called "House on Top of the Hill." It's the third book in the BryonySeries Limbo trilogy and the trilogy's tagline is this: What happens when time stops in a fishing village in Northern Michigan? The supernatural reigns.

The entire book was loosely drafted when I began my retreat and ready for editing through chapter eight. So my goals for this retreat was to complete one chapter a day with the larger of goal of having the book ready for final editing by the end of summer. 

Some of these chapters from the retreat will need heavy editing. But others are nearly ready to go. Overall, I wrote approximately 2,500 to 3,000 words a day on the retreat, in addition to re-reading some of that work and getting some good editing done on those words.

Read this post to see what these retreats typically look like. You will see why I am always happy to return to work.

Below is a synopsis, chapter titles, and cover concept. The chapters in italics are the ones ready for editing. I made it through chapter sixteen on the retreat and plan to get through chapter nineteen (chapter twenty if the last three days go better than I planned).

Wish me luck for this long weekend!

Change comes slowly to Munsonville, and for Steve Barnes, who spends his entire life in the village, that's just fine. From boyhood to manhood, he savors the slow pace and friendly smiles, even while working by his parents' side from sunup to sundown to run the family diner.

The only blight is this fishing village's preoccupation with an empty mansion in the woods, whose tales of former glory and catastrophe fueled a rampage of ghost stories. Steve doesn't believe them, but some do – and no no one can deny the power the crumbling old building holds over them.

Especially when it changes everyone, including Steve, forever.


Prologue

Chapter 1: The Traveling Salesman

Chapter 2: Roundtable

Chapter 3: Bottle of the Red Stuff

Chapter 4: Cracking Open the Nest Egg

Chapter 5: Scrawls on the Wall

Chapter 6: Whispers of the Heart

Chapter 7: I Run at Night

Chapter 8: Laid to Rest:

Chapter 9: Necking

Chapter 10: Spider and Fly

Chapter 11: Death Heard Round the World

Chapter 12: Mine

Chapter 13: Second Sight

Chapter 14: Chop, Sizzle, Broil, and Bake for it and some against it.

Chapter 15: The Rage

Chapter 16: Hard Choice to Make

Chapter 17: Through the Camera’s Eye

Chapter 18: Words Enough For Me

Chapter 19: The All-Hallowed Albatross

Chapter 20: Dancing in the Past

Chapter 21: The New Professor

Chapter 22: Enigma in Residence

Chapter 23: Rain

Chapter 24: From Fry Pan to Factotum

Chapter 25: Nutty Tina Swanson and Kellen

Chapter 26: Preternatural Guest

Chapter 27: The News That Changed Everything

Chapter 28: A New Lease on a Very Old Dream

Chapter 29: Journey of a Thousand Heartaches

Chapter 30: Severed Links

Epilogue




Cover art concept for "House on Top of the Hill " created by Timothy Baran

Tuesday, October 24, 2023

Recap of 2023 At-Home Writing Retreat

The writing project for my at-home 2023 writing retreat really was as tedious as writing a dictionary.

I've been working on a guidebook for the BryonySeries called "Welcome to Munsonville: The People, Places, and Things of the BryonySeries." I have a screenshot below, so you can see what I mean.

It took many months to enter all the people, places, and things. So I had barely started writing the "people" descriptions when the retreat started.

My goal was to complete the book, an impossible task, but I embarked upon it anyway.

It probably didn't help that I also had two doctor appointments, one meeting two events, one concert, a three-hour Zoom call with a family member, a WriteOn Joliet Zoom meeting, and several hours on two separate occasions with Rebekah as we ploughed through medical bills and caught up on BryonySeries accounts all happening in the same week.

Not exactly a full writing retreat. But as much of a writing retreat as I could manage for this year.

We did ignore the housework until Sunday. And then we spent several hours catching up.

Still, with all that in the background, I did manage to complete "people" and "places." I am now working on "things," the largest section but with the one with the least cross references. 

I'm readjusting my expectations that I can complete this book, including the time needed for actual production, in time for the holidays. But we shall see.

With 2023 being a year of the unexpected, with many of the "unexpectedness" being difficult and challenging, the year just might surprise me in a good way.

We shall see.

In the meantime, I have "Karla Joins In" to copyedit this week.

Or, at least, that is the current plan.

Have a great Tuesday!




Monday, April 4, 2022

Bits and Pieces

It's been a topsy turvy couple of weeks with all sorts of things going sideways (weekend shift, out-of-town family in town, illness, life and death-type emergencies: you know, the "life" stuff we all have).

So here's a quick recap of things happening in the BryonySeries world. The above statement explains why we're delayed.

1) Sue's Diner: Yes, I know we haven't posted a new recipe in two weeks. And we do have one to post. I have the photo. Rebekah has the recipe. The two just need to meet. Maybe tomorrow, even. But the old one is still up, if you haven't checked it out yet.

2) Updated calendar of activities: That's on my list for next weekend. In the meantime, all the old activities are still up (ignore the banner; that's Timothy being efficient).

3) New Cornell Dyer books: We have two ready to go. Rebekah doesn't the final production and she's been swamped. And Timothy has a third idea ready. He and I just need our schedules to sync up to work on it. In the meantime, you still have plenty of titles to read.

4) Call of the Siren: This is the second book in the BryonySeries Limbo trilogy. All of it, I'm happy to say, is written and fairly edited. However, it needs quite a bit of work on some of the minor characters and some nuanced editing that I've (sort of) invented, a first for me. Still, I'm happy with the progress as this book challenged me quite a bit.

5) In-Person Events: We've discussed doing more of these this year.

And that's it! I hope each and every one of you reading this is having a fantastic start to your day. :)





Tuesday, August 25, 2020

Going Backwards (and Retreat Update)

While many writers enjoy the exhilaration, creativity, and freedom of first drafts, I'm not one of them.

I felt that slew of emotions with the first two and half books in the "drop of blood" trilogy and then I hit some serious writer's block and abandoned the third for a few months.

By then, I had a contract with a small press and had begun the serious editing process. Watching my words take on the shape of what I had really meant to write was the real sense of satisfaction.

First drafts are not like that.

As are many "firsts" in life, I suppose.

All sense of polish and shine aren't the writer's friends in those early drafts. In order to get the words out, especially in such rapid fashion as I'm doing this week, you must resort to weak and clumsy and cliche - everything writers try to avoid.

Writing this way feels like going backwards. But you know the old saying.

But even as writers push forward, a part of them should remain comfortable with their own sloppy writing. During the drafting stage, it's important not to get hung up on phrasing, mood (except to simply state it), deep characterization and setting, the five senses, etc. until to, again, state the intention.

The clean-up comes later. But you can't clean-up a mess you didn't make. You can't prune a plant you didn't grow. You can't refine words you didn't write.

So for any writer out there (or anyone, really) in their same routine who thinks I'm currently sitting in a dreamy, caffeinated haze while swimming in my imagination, that's not happening.

But the words are happening. And I'll be very happy I wrote them when, next weekend, I want to spend Saturday editing a chapter I wrote this past week. And I'll be happy the following Saturday, too, when I want to do the same thing.

I'm happy now, too, of course. Happy that I work for a company that gives me vacation time. Happy for the opportunity to spend a week working on a goal. Happy for a family that supports my rather pointless writing and isn't spending too much luring me away from it. Happy for the calico cat who lets me have nearly have my desk chair.

Happy for the hot weather this week that makes it sensible to stay inside writing. And happy, of course, for coffee and imagination.

So am I hitting the goal?


All the even chapters of The Phoenix or fifteen chapters. This is first and foremost. And I started on it yesterday afternoon and wrote until my brain shut off at 9:30 p.m. (but I did have an extremely short night of sleep Thursday into Friday).

Finish formatting Lycanthropic Summer. Since I want to release it by October 1, this is important

Finish the last two chapters of Cornell Dyer and the Old Folks Home and copy edit it. My goal is three books a year. I'm just on the first one. So I'm way behind.

Finish formatting WriteOn Joliet's fourth anthology. This is even more first and foremost than The Phoenix.

Get the content Rebekah needs for a new website. Can't move forward without this. Better make it a priority.

Get Rebekah the photos she needs for the new Bertrand book. The goal is three a year. We released one last year. Again, way behind.

So far:

Nearly two chapter drafts of The Phoenix each day, and that's it.

Slightly behind, but yesterday was a day of intermittent interruptions and one health emergency for my oldest son.

But at this rate, I'll have all of the chapters of The Phoenix drafted by Saturday morning.

And I'll still have the weekend to finish the plan.

That is the plan from a Tuesday morning point of view.

Illustration by Kathleen Rose Van Pelt for "Bryony."

Monday, July 3, 2017

Did I Get It All Done?

On Friday, these were the weekend goals, now with Monday morning commentaries:


Goals for this weekend?

Probably sleep in until six a.m. or so since tonight will be late (Actually 6:20 a.m.)

Work on Before the Blood until early afternoon. (Check!)

Upload Cornell. (Nope. A second person did a copy edit, too, and want to double-check with her book).

Put together the second Bertrand book. (Half-check, half-done)

Make some yarn dolls for the third Bertrand book. (Whoops! Forgot about this one. Will try to do tomorrow).

Finally write a chapter in the second Cornell book: Cornell Dyer and the Necklace of Forgetfulness. (Got quite a bit of global progress done, as well as global work on the next two books and overall direction of the series, yay, me!)

MAYBE do a little work with the bryonyseries website. (Rebekah and I made a list). (Nope. Rebekah had an extremely stressful week.Not the Saturday for a project). 

Upload a new recipe to Sue's Diner. Haven't checked out this week's recipe? Please do so before it goes away.  (Old recipe gone, new recipe uploaded. Please check it out. It's extremely simple to make and refreshing on a hot day).

Attend a work-related event in the evening. (Check. And even made it downtown for a fireworks show. And I got some errands done).


Sunday was church, work, and walking.

How about you? How was your weekend?